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Cringe Worthy
honey:
lol. nice. I only wrote one BSB story back in the day, but it's bad enough to make up of all of your horrible ones!
Rose:
Oh it can't be THAT bad lol.
But now do you get why I was hesitant to believe I could actually do 1st person decently?
LMAO I just got sent another horrible example.
Chapter 2
Nikki’s POV
Now, I was going to do everything possible not to get caught. In fact I was ecstatic when Nick became apart of BSB that way if he was ever caught people would know he was gone. It’d be in the news all over the world. Now when I was 16 I went around the world with them on their tour cause I kept begging my mom to go. Mark (their vocal coach) ended up becoming my vocal coach cause he said I had a golden voice just like Nick and it didn’t hurt that I wrote my own songs that he said match up to any pro in the biz.
Then Fatima, their dance coach, started teaching me some dance moves of my own cause she saw how much fun I was having doing the boys’ dance moves. After awhile when we weren’t on tour they called Lou and he signed me. I became the Backstreet Boys’ opening act at only 16.
On the day I found out…
I came driving home in my little Pontiac grand am, parked the car and went racing into the house.
“MOM! MOM!!” I scream rushing into the kitchen only to find the BSB sitting there discussing how to become famous in the U.S. cause they were only famous in Europe.
“Whoa Nikki, where’s the fire!” Brian asks as he’s getting up to get a drink.
“I just got signed!”
They all rushed up and hugged me.
“Oh, my God that’s great Geni!” (My middle name was Gena soNick’s private nickname for me was Geni and for him mine was Snicker.)
“Wait there’s more, I’m gonna be your guys’ opening act!!!!!”
I didn’t know it then but that was when the trouble officially began.
Oh...wow I'm laughing so hard at myself
honey:
--- Quote from: Rose on June 10, 2008, 12:20:30 AM ---Oh it can't be THAT bad lol.
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ok, that's it... let me see if I can go find it...
julilly:
--- Quote from: honey on June 09, 2008, 11:49:05 PM --- Fan Friction is kicking my butt
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Being inside my brain does that to people
Steph:
I am really tempted to dig through my room and try to find my very first fanfiction ever. It. Was. TERRIBLE. *shudders*
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