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Author Topic: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)  (Read 23701 times)

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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #75 on: June 03, 2008, 09:39:24 PM »
Quote from: mare on June 03, 2008, 09:38:43 PM
You guys have some more reviews lol this person likes your originals better than the rewrites

LMAO The AC readers never fail to disappoint.
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #76 on: June 03, 2008, 11:18:00 PM »
^ LOL!  I just saw that, but she said j/j... I believe that means just joking. ;)   Good thing, cause otherwise, uh.......
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #77 on: June 03, 2008, 11:23:37 PM »
She said my first version wasn't that cringe worthy lol. *twitches* there are so many tense issues, cheesy descriptions focusing on Nick, and lack of flow all over the place. Gah lol.
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #78 on: June 03, 2008, 11:41:21 PM »
Well, it's all relative.  It wasn't as cringe-worthy as, say, mine!  LOL
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #79 on: June 04, 2008, 12:20:53 AM »
Point taken, my stuff that was that bad has all been lost or in my old journals in storage boxes thankfully lol.
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #80 on: June 04, 2008, 05:40:20 AM »
Quote from: RokofAges75 on June 03, 2008, 11:41:21 PM
Well, it's all relative.  It wasn't as cringe-worthy as, say, mine!  LOL

Or mine lol Brandy is one of my readers and she was like Wow... That was YOUR story? LOL
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #81 on: June 04, 2008, 02:37:33 PM »
^ You should go post it on AC in the story called Cringes
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #82 on: June 04, 2008, 02:45:11 PM »
Quote from: mare on June 04, 2008, 02:37:33 PM
^ You should go post it on AC in the story called Cringes

Oooh I didn't realize I could do that!  LOL!  Thanks!   :D
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #83 on: June 04, 2008, 02:46:39 PM »
^ no problemo lol
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #84 on: June 04, 2008, 10:36:48 PM »
You guys have some more reviews and a read count of over 600! Nice to know people want to see cringe worthy material! lol
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #85 on: June 06, 2008, 04:51:23 AM »
Quote from: mare on June 04, 2008, 10:36:48 PM
You guys have some more reviews and a read count of over 600! Nice to know people want to see cringe worthy material! lol

I don't think anyone's reviewed mine yet.  LOL!  I don't know if that's a good or bad thing.  LOL!   :P
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Re: OMG like what was that supposed to be? *cringes* (June challenge 1)
« Reply #86 on: June 25, 2008, 10:43:37 AM »
Julie you got another review for your chapter of the Cringes thing lol
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