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Featured Story of the Month for July 2008 - If Tomorrow Never Comes by Ashley
MonkeyAbu:
--- Quote from: mare on July 08, 2008, 06:47:19 PM ---What was your favorite scene to write so far?
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I would have answered this question sooner but I found it rather difficult to pick just one. I have a bunch of moments that I love, but I suppose I'ma have to say chapter 13.
http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=8337&chapter=13
I'm picking this chapter (to me it works together as just one big scene) because of the collection of emotions that are thrown in and I'm big on emotions.
It takes place two months after the moment that changed Brian's life. There's a certain air of awkwardness that lingers in the background, first before Brian even enters the building, when it's just AJ, Howie, Kevin, and Nick in the room. Then Brian steps in and the awkwardness gets pretty powerful. Between all of the characters I think it was unintentional but natural at the same time because of what has happened and as it explains in the first part of the chapter, they hadn't all seen each other since Brian was released from the hospital. After that they seem to try too hard to act normal, but everyone knows that always backfires in a situation because then it just gets even more awkward. Towards the end of the chapter they get down to business and discuss what the plans for the group should be. This is where things get sticky. Brian is having a hard time dealing with what's happened and what's gonna happen. He ends up taking offense to what is being said when the guys are only looking out for his best interests. I don't know if any of my explanation made sense, but I guess what I am trying to say is that I think chapter 13 is a great example of the beginning of all of the inner turmoil everyone starts to go through, especially Brian. That's why it's my favorite scene so far?
luna610:
Just want to say that I've been reading, and I love the story so far!!!
MonkeyAbu:
Thank you Sel! I am reading your reviews right now and I appreciate your feedback! :)
sweet18_2003:
I so suck and found this for the first time...but CONGRATS!!!! You got your month!!! GO Ashie!!!
MonkeyAbu:
^ Why tankies! Yay! :D
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