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Featured Story of the Month for October: Satan's Playground by rebellious_one

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Kentuckychickrk:
Congrats Reb!
I've been out of town for an entire week and I feel so out of the loop... I've heard a lot about this story but hadn't gotten around to reading it yet.  This will be a good time to do so!  I look forward to getting started  ;D

rebellious_one:
^Aww, thanks hun!! Hope you like it. :)

rebellious_one:
In case anyone wants to know, I've progressed well with an update and I'm hoping to post it by tonight or tomorrow, PROMISE!! ;D

honey:
Hey! Ok, SO I finally caught up...  (Ok, I say finally, but aside from reading chapter one the other night, I read it all in one sitting.)


First of all for me to finish anything at all these days, that means I found it highly entertaining, and I find myself joining the club that awaits the updates. (which I noticed don't come that often missy... *taps foot expectantly*)

I absolutely adore the premiss of this story! The idea of Satan having his own little spot on this Earth where he can control and torment people, and where spirits have control of the land... Creepy and exciting all that the same time.

I was also highly amused by the thought of the reality show sucking the guys into the story. I've never seen FEAR once, so I don't really know how the game works, but you do a great job of setting it all up and explaining what's going on for those of us who are unfamiliar with it.

You also have some fun banter between all the guys here and there and I liked that you made some of them really gung-ho and some of them pissed about having to be there. HAHA that management agreed to it without even asking their permission. Sucks to be at the mercy of a Label.

All that being said, I do have some critiques/thoughts that came to mind as I read the story. If you'd like the feedback, I'm more than willing to share. I hope I didn't scare you, i just know that I've given people "feedback" before and it's not always appreciated. It's nothing bad, of course, and honestly, I don't really know what I'm doing any more than you, but just thought I'd make sure you're interested before leaving "feedback" along with my review.


Over-all, this is a very unique, creative, creepy story with some really awesome, creative paranormal ideas. And I'd definitely recommend people check it out! Very well done Reb! I liked it and am looking forward to reading more.

rebellious_one:
I'm open to any and all critiques/feedback. :D

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