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Featured Story of the Month for October: Satan's Playground by rebellious_one
Kentuckychickrk:
Loving the story so far -- and SO looking forward to the next update.
I really enjoy the supernatural shows like "Ghost Hunters" and "Most Haunted" (Most Haunted is C-O-R-N-Y though) and any shows similar. This one really pulls me in. I agree with Honey, I'd love to read more about what the guys are feeling during their experiences... really get into their heads during the scariest moments, but so far I'm hooked ;D
rebellious_one:
^Aww, thanks hun!! And I love "Ghost Hunters" too, that show really freaks me out!! I'm working on delving into the guys' psyche, but I'm trying to figure out a way to transition smoothly into it. Like I said, this is something I'll more than likely be revising/rewriting, so thanks for all this feedback. I'm really happy that you're enjoying it though, and thanks again. :)
rebellious_one:
Okay, I'm hoping I can post another update either by tonight or tomorrow, just in time for my birthday!! Lol. But um... I'm kinda having a hard time because I'm not really transitioning smoothly into tapping into the guys' emotions. :(
**EDIT**
Update is up and running. :)
MonkeyAbu:
I agree that I would like to see more tappage into the Boys' emotions, but you're gettin' there, so don't worry too much about it. A quick transition may actually do more harm to the story then good. A slow smooth transition should do it justice. Don't rush it.
I gotta say that I absolutely enjoy your vivid creative imagination when it comes to the premise of this whole story, especially the recent chapter when Brian entered the chapel. I know I said it in the review, but the way you described it really allowed me the chance to visualize to the point where I felt like I was walking into that chapel right along with Brian. What I want to know is did you have any inspiration for how you described the detail of the chapel? Or was it purely something you pulled out of your imagination? Because dude, you know me...if it was real, I would so go there. Yes, I am kinda psychotic like that...
Kentuckychickrk:
--- Quote from: rebellious_one on October 09, 2008, 01:10:42 AM ---Okay, I'm hoping I can post another update either by tonight or tomorrow, just in time for my birthday!! Lol. But um... I'm kinda having a hard time because I'm not really transitioning smoothly into tapping into the guys' emotions. :(
**EDIT**
Update is up and running. :)
--- End quote ---
Awesome update! Very exciting and captivating. I think you're doing a good job at transitioning. It is hard and I agree with monkey -- I think the slower, smoother transition like you're doing will be much more effective then going it too quickly.
I really look forward to reading more ;)
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