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Hi AC/FICTALKers. If you see this (11/12/2024) please see new post in General Discussions about Open Doors OTW Organization for Transformative Works) offering to help preserve the AC archive and let me know your thoughts:

https://absolutechaos.net/fictalk/index.php/topic,3415.msg125627.html#new

Author Topic: Oppinions appreciated !!  (Read 1531 times)

nicksz-wiifey

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Oppinions appreciated !!
« on: March 20, 2009, 10:20:00 AM »
Heey everyone.
I just started writing fanfictions and I posted my first 2 chapters of my first story (which im still writing so its unfished)
And since im new to all this.
I was wondering if you guys could give me some tips.
Let me know what Im doing wrong and what not to do and stuff like  that

And specially since english isnt my first language im kind of insecure about that aswell


heres my story : No One Else Comes Close To You
(its still short so its not like you'll have to raed 20 chapters lol)

And please give me some tips or just let me know what you think sofar.
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