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« Reply #15 on: February 17, 2009, 08:02:05 AM » |
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I really like it, sounds like it's gonna be something completely different. I love AU's and romance.
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« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2009, 08:33:18 AM » |
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Yeah... I must admit that I'm pretty critical about what I read aswell. If it's just one big mess or one long post, I won't even bother...
I like constructive criticism, cos it can help you improve it... It's better than someone just telling you it's crap lol.
This one isn't really a romance, sure it has elements of it but it's not the main focus... It's about Nick trying to get through highschool while battling the schizophrenic side. The reason I put the basketball in it, is just cos I know he loves it (and it's another battle, having to be the star amongst the other)... And then it won't be totally out of character.
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« Reply #17 on: February 17, 2009, 08:52:40 AM » |
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Sounds really promising. Can't wait to read the rest.
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« Reply #18 on: February 17, 2009, 11:29:45 PM » |
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It's an interesting idea to make him schizophrenic. How much research did you do on the topic? I'd love links because i'm thinking of maybe trying out a story using mental health issues and i'd love to get some links besides the ones I already have.
Great start! Can't wait to see what else you come up with!
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~*Dee*~ People think it would be fun to be a bird because you could fly. But they forget the negative side, which is the preening. From "And Now, Deep Thoughts" by Jack Handey |
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« Reply #19 on: February 17, 2009, 11:37:00 PM » |
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There might be some things worth contributing to the medical glossary thread too
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What's the difference between ignorance and apathy? ... I don't know, and I don't care.
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« Reply #20 on: February 17, 2009, 11:43:43 PM » |
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Totally.  I love when people can contribute to stuff like that, because I'm totally clueless. lol
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~*Dee*~ People think it would be fun to be a bird because you could fly. But they forget the negative side, which is the preening. From "And Now, Deep Thoughts" by Jack Handey |
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RokofAges75
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So intense.
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« Reply #21 on: March 09, 2009, 05:44:10 PM » |
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Hey Jess, check your PMs!
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« Reply #22 on: June 30, 2009, 08:33:31 PM » |
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Bumping, as this was one of the fics stolen by Tanja. Just a reminder she's posted other fandom fics as BSB ones too. This was stolen from a HSM fic. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3319399/1/Concealed_Remonstrance |
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You need love!
Please don't change the way you are,
Soon you'll live within my heart.
You deserve it, you know it...
You've been searching for it all of your life...
You need love!
Don't be scared to try again.
You can rest upon my chest,
And I'll hold you, I'll save you
You've been searching for it all of your life
You need love!
"All of Your Life (Need Love)" - Backstreet Boys |
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RokofAges75
Head Hunter
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Posts: 9870
So intense.
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« Reply #23 on: June 30, 2009, 08:42:32 PM » |
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Hahaha, oh Tanja! We played along with your whole Jess alter ego, but you disappeared before we could out you! Now that's no fun!
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Rose
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« Reply #24 on: June 30, 2009, 08:56:37 PM » |
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I know, it was so disappointing.
So figured we may as well chime in here too lol.
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You need love!
Please don't change the way you are,
Soon you'll live within my heart.
You deserve it, you know it...
You've been searching for it all of your life...
You need love!
Don't be scared to try again.
You can rest upon my chest,
And I'll hold you, I'll save you
You've been searching for it all of your life
You need love!
"All of Your Life (Need Love)" - Backstreet Boys |
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« Reply #25 on: June 30, 2009, 09:36:14 PM » |
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*sigh* and I so loved our plan lol
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Ah well, there's always next year!
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