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Lets make a story all together...
DragonStar:
--- Quote from: mare on March 03, 2007, 09:25:08 PM ---It happened so fast, she barely knew what hit her. First the rush of the ambulance, then the sounds of her friends and family crying, so loud it hurt her ears then fading into the distance as she realized that she was the one they were crying for...or more appropriately, mourning for.
LOL! Sorry I keep modifying it. I'm done now, I promise. I hope I didn't mess anyone up/ :P
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As she replayed the haunting day over and over again in her mind like a horror movie she couldn't turn away from, her view rose, and it was as if she was floating over the scene, watching the pandemonium below. Look back at it that way, it felt as if it had all happened to someone else. She wished it had really all happened to someone else.
Rose:
It was as if it came in a dream, the way it hazily floated through her mind now. Constantly replaying in her mind. It was so surreal. No one would believe the truth of it all. It was beyond the world's perceptions of what reality was. Something only told in fairy tales or horror movies, not supposed to exist or occur here. But it had. It had and it had happened to her of all the people in the world. It was anything but fair. A sigh came then. She knew the truth of the accident. What happened before the ambulances, firetrucks, police, and family came. She wondered, could she tell them? Could she warn them of what was to come next? She knew the truth, what was to come, and the inevitability of it all burned within her damaged soul.
starbeamz:
--- Quote from: Rose on March 05, 2007, 02:53:09 PM ---It was as if it came in a dream, the way it hazily floated through her mind now. Constantly replaying in her mind. It was so surreal. No one would believe the truth of it all. It was beyond the world's perceptions of what reality was. Something only told in fairy tales or horror movies, not supposed to exist or occur here. But it had. It had and it had happened to her of all the people in the world. It was anything but fair. A sigh came then. She knew the truth of the accident. What happened before the ambulances, firetrucks, police, and family came. She wondered, could she tell them? Could she warn them of what was to come next? She knew the truth, what was to come, and the inevitability of it all burned within her damaged soul.
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And she knew that, if she didn't find a way to show them, someone else would fall, too. More importantly, she needed to find a way to show HIM before it was too late. Because he was next.
P.S. I don't know if I'm allowed to add more from me because I'd already put in a part before, but meh. Oh, and I brought "him" back because I figured the beginning had something about his proposal, etc.
Rose:
LOL I love how it was going to be just a total drama/angst till I came along and gave it a twist hehe ;D
DragonStar:
--- Quote from: starbeamz2 on March 05, 2007, 09:51:24 PM ---And she knew that, if she didn't find a way to show them, someone else would fall, too. More importantly, she needed to find a way to show HIM before it was too late. Because he was next.
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All she could hope for was that he didn't blame her for the whole situation. There was more going on here than any of them could hope to understand.
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