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ok, another question... about 1st person

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RokofAges75:
That sounds fine.  "Were," not "where" - otherwise, looks good.  The tense is perfect.

Sakabelle:
Yup, tense looks good to me too! That's pretty much exactly what I would have done. Because "Did he really just say that to Kevin?" is the thought the character would have had at the time, at least in my mind. Makes sense to me!

alota_cookin:
I mix the tenses, too. I primarily write in past but put a lot of present in, too...dependin g on what flows the best. Usually, I just go with what I think sounds right and then hope everyone else thinks it does, too. LOL!

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