OK, absolutechaos is doing that thing again where it keeps logging me off. lol It's been doing it a little since last week, and now I can't quote. We'll see if this posts... *crosses fingers*
Hm... my favorite part to write? I really enjoyed the scene where Brian wakes up in Nick's body. I loved the little clues leading up to it and then how Brian realized he wasn't himself. In general, my favorite parts of this story are simply where Nick and Brian are just by themselves talking or bantering. It was really fun to write both of their characters and I like how the dynamic between them changes throughout the chapters.
As for what I would change, I would actually probably make it a little longer. My problem was that I was running out of humorous material and I didn't want to drag it out too much. This was my first story where I really focused on the comedy aspect, and I didn't want to drive it into the ground. Also, while some of the more serious pieces of the storyline were important and I wanted the story to be meaningful, I think there are a few places where I could've balanced the comedy with the drama a little better. Like a Friends episode: there will be a serious conversation or scene, and then it will end with a great one-liner. But practice makes perfect, so I'll keep it in mind for next time!
Alexsgirl, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
You're right, since it's on paper, you do have to visualize in your head sometomes who is who to make it make sense. It was a little tricky. And yes, there was some ill-will when Nick ventured out as a solo artist. Although the events, of course, in this story are my speculation, I'd imagine Brian would've been one of the ones to take it the hardest and take it personally