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50 Shades of Grey - kinda curious on everyone's thoughts
Sakabelle:
That's what this book is currently teaching me.
mare:
That's why I'll never make it lol :(
RokofAges75:
You've already got the torture part down, Mare. Now you just need to make it sexy. When someone carves MINE into Nick's flesh, it should be because he BEGGED for it. Turn his screams of agony into screams of ecstasy, and you're there!
mare:
I shall try that. I guess I'll have to work on awkward English as well lol
RokofAges75:
Just read some 19th century literary classics, as well as the Bible, and try to model your writing after those, linguistically . Or read some of the "special" stuff on AC and become fluent in caveman speak.
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