Fic Talk > I Challenge You....
Let the Summer Reading Commence! :O)
Purpura Lipstick:
That section of the whole Jeff/Julie and the Nick sex was the one area of the story where I really, really had a hard time wrapping my head around myself. In retrospect I would have taken the Jeff/Julie thing a completely different way but I think I was so caught up in the story and my own outline that I didn't take the time to deter with that part to make it work better. This was the area of the story where Nick took over, bastard! I tried to steer him different ways but he was like "I'm not the main character! Ha! watch me morph my own role"
Rose:
Yeah, you definitely rushed that, so it seems very very out of character and confusing. I think maybe if you had taken more time with it, I'd have been able to see where everyone was coming from. As it reads, yeah I was a bit "whoa, wait, what?!" on it LOL.
Purpura Lipstick:
And I'm done with Remember Me This Way, phew. Now I don't have to worry about the tears that will come cause I'm done they are done...
It's hard for me to think of anything to really comment on now. I've told her how I liked how she portrayed the guys in the story and how towards the end of the story it switched from us seeing Nick's mind to seeing what it was doing to everyone else.
Do we have the completed survey yet? LOL
Purpura Lipstick:
and to clarify, it's not my typical type because I don't like reading stories I know will make me tear up... seriously that's the only reason. LOL
Rose:
LOL just wait till you finish Curtain Call.
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