Fic Talk > I Challenge You....
Let the Summer Reading Commence! :O)
kevmylove:
My kids are on vacation now so I'll be able to read more now.
Thank you Tracy for the reviews I'm so glad you're enjoying JOK so far. I thought if I made it more comedic then it wouldn't seem so corny. lol.
Alexsgirl_ritz:
I haven't forgotten about this. Next week, I promise I'll read one chapter every lunch break. :)
Rose:
I haven't forgotten. Things have just been a busy. No worries! :)
Rose:
Okay, I'm a couple chapters in Chronos Project and I really like the plot idea. Now I have to admit, I'm really picky with female leads, especially if there's barely any sign of the Boys lol. Kevin has appeared for about half a scene, but not much else. I don't know why, but Julie just doesn't seem that engaging as a character. At the same time, it's very early into the fic so it could just be my own pickiness lol.
I like how she explains bits and pieces through dialogue instead of through blocks of text. Too many people try to tell and instead she shows through the conversation with comes off a lot better. It tells some but not everything which makes you want to keep reading.
Rose:
Spoke too soon about Kevin lol. He came back again in the next chapter, oops! :P
While Julie's not catching my attention, the way Lore writes Kevin is. I definitely like how he's portrayed.
On another note, I do wanna ask why there's author's notes saying what's coming in the chapter. As a reader I HATE that cause I don't wanna know till I read it LOL. It's just a pet peeve on my end cause it feels like a spoiler I can't control. So I don't get the point of it.
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