Fic Talk > I Challenge You....
Let the Summer Reading Commence! :O)
carterkid:
Story you are reading:Snowed In
How many chapters are in the story? 15
What chapter are you currently on? N/A
Are the main characters easily defined and strong? yes
Have you figured out the overall plot of the story? yes
So far what has been your favorite scene? The part where Brian comes in and stands in the doorway.The other guys can't get in. LOL
Has the story been edited enough to read comfortably? yes,you can read it but there were small places with missing words.
Do you have any questions for the author? not right now don't know if that will change.
Is this something you are looking forward to reading the entire way through? I have my story done.It was a great read.
Is the author responding to your feedback regularly? yes
Alexsgirl_ritz:
I was about to copy/paste the questions of the survey when I saw the first line saying I must read at least 5 chapters before filling out the survey. lol I have to read two more chapters to qualify. :)
mare:
That's okay, Ritz! I picked five chapters because at this point in June that should be the least you have read to this point unless you are reading a very short story. You're almost there though! I just did my check lol
Purpura Lipstick:
--- Quote from: Rose on June 22, 2012, 02:44:02 AM ---Spoke too soon about Kevin lol. He came back again in the next chapter, oops! :P
While Julie's not catching my attention, the way Lore writes Kevin is. I definitely like how he's portrayed.
On another note, I do wanna ask why there's author's notes saying what's coming in the chapter. As a reader I HATE that cause I don't wanna know till I read it LOL. It's just a pet peeve on my end cause it feels like a spoiler I can't control. So I don't get the point of it.
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if you can figure out what it is about Julie that is not catching your attention I would love to know so I can grow with my non-bsb leads.
I did quite enjoy writing Kevin in this story. :)
I did the author notes for this story because back on ff.net days I remember doing the chapter teasers and thought I would use it for this one. I don't typically use them but I did for this. The only thing I found it useful for was me going back to find scenes while I was writing later chapters so I could try to keep plot points straight. I did it for the sequel too but not sure I'd continue it for the last one. I don't like them now either but not sure if I should go through and delete them or leave them be since that is how did it originally.
Purpura Lipstick:
Story you are reading: Remember Me This Way
How many chapters are in the story? 39 + Introduction and Epilogue
What chapter are you currently on? 10
Are the main characters easily defined and strong? I have a clear understanding of Nick’s character and how he is reacting to his predicament
Have you figured out the overall plot of the story? I knew it going in…
So far what has been your favorite scene? I like the description of the therapist and her strange baubles, lol because I knew who that was based off of. I do love the scene between Nick and Kevin when he finally breaks down and tells Kevin what is going on with him.
Has the story been edited enough to read comfortably? Yes, it’s Rose so of course it is.
Do you have any questions for the author? I usually ask them in my reviews and Rose is good about answering them so far
Is this something you are looking forward to reading the entire way through? Honestly, no. It has NOTHING to do with the story, the plot is good, the story flows well and the story is being told incredibly well. I am not looking forward to the tears being fought back as I read….
Is the author responding to your feedback regularly? Yes and I appreciate it.
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