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FS for August: Fight Me by kevmylove
kevmylove:
I'm not sure if me asking questions is wrong. I just want to know what the readers think.
Is there something you would have changed about this story? (Besides Turbo being drowned!)
mare:
There's nothing wrong with it. It's your thread you can do what you want lol
Purpura Lipstick:
--- Quote from: kevmylove on August 11, 2012, 03:11:41 AM ---I'm not sure if me asking questions is wrong. I just want to know what the readers think.
Is there something you would have changed about this story? (Besides Turbo being drowned!)
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I might have killed Nick. How heartwrenching that would be that he'd finally turned himself around, stood up to the bad guys, found love and then died to protect that love. I would have hated if you'd done it but I think killing him off would have made it that much better.
kevmylove:
--- Quote from: Purpura Lipstick on August 11, 2012, 02:45:43 PM ---I might have killed Nick. How heartwrenching that would be that he'd finally turned himself around, stood up to the bad guys, found love and then died to protect that love. I would have hated if you'd done it but I think killing him off would have made it that much better.
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I did have that in mind at first, but as the story progressed I just couldn't bring myself to kill him. When he gets shot towards the end...I waited a bit because I still thought about it. lol. Seems to be I can only kill off Kevin in my stories...lol. That's how much I love him.
mare:
Me again lol
I love that you are asking questions, Erika! I think it's a great idea and helps get a discussion going.
What inspires you to write?
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