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Questions to ponder part 12
rebellious_one:
Yeah, that jab was enough to make me a little nauseous, lol.
Another peeve of mine, which doesn't happen often these days, but I seen it recently, was reading a story that was typed like this:
AJ ran up to Nick, arms stretched out.
"Nick don't go!!! Nick no!!!"
"I'm sorry AJ, but I'm a loner... and a loners gotta be alone."
AJ tried desperately to keep his friend from walking off.
He fell to the ground, sobbing uncontrollably, reaching out to his friend who was now leaving.
Nick trotted into the sunset.
AJ remained on the ground, a wreck.
mare:
It's even worse when they don't bother to break it up and it's one big paragraph of FAIL! lol
rebellious_one:
--- Quote from: mare on August 02, 2014, 06:23:48 AM ---OMG can I just say banners in general? Just...stop!
And yes, I'm not really all the interested in what you do with Nick in the shower, or anybody else for that matter! lol
--- End quote ---
There's only so much you can do in a shower........ .... right? LOL!!! Be different and write about, I don't know, what people actually do in the shower at least. Have Nick pass you the loofa. You scrub his back cause he can't reach. Bitch about using cheap ass Vidal Sassoon shampoo instead of Dove. Have Nick accidentally bathe himself with your Summer's Eve Feminine cleansing wash.
RokofAges75:
^ LMAO!! You're cracking me up this morning.
rebellious_one:
Yeah, don't mind me, I don't know what's going on, if I'm on crack or something, lol. I'm going delirious cause I'm tired, but don't necessarily wanna go to sleep yet, lol.
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