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nicksgal:
--- Quote from: FrickingKaos on February 11, 2021, 10:06:45 PM ---I always hated valentines day. I never got cards from the other kids cause I was picked on a lot for being the weird kid. Then as an adult. I've only had a date twice. Once wasy ex Joe who took me to the olive garden and got me a fake rose since I said I didn't like getting real flowers due to the fact they die.
Then the other one wasn't really a date but this guy I was talking to at the time named Will stopped by my job and gave me flowers and brought me chocolate, and sushi for lunch since I had to work. We were only together a month, I dumped him cause he tried to control me. I also found out he tried to pick up my cousin when we were together. Valentines day for me is a day to get excited only cause chocolate on the 15th is on sale 50 percent off. I'm now a diabetic so I can't even fully enjoy that. I'll live through my characters instead xD
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The not being able to enjoy chocolate half off is the icing on that disappointing cake. You're awesome! :) Mean-spirited people are not worth the time.
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on February 11, 2021, 10:08:46 PM ---Aww, that is sad. We've always had a rule that if the kids are going to bring Valentines (which is not required), they have to have one for everyone in the class. It's definitely more fun in elementary school than junior high and high school.
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Yup, that's the rule we have as well. All or none.
nicksgal:
I also have a side note... Back on our sex topic: what's the least stupid way to write "If you keep looking at me like you want me, I'll have sex with you again right now." Because I have been trying different things for months and they all sound so stupid... (including that)
* "I’ll do it again if you keep looking at me like that."
* "Keep looking at me like that if you want seconds."
* "Keep looking at me like that and I'll have you again."
* "$&@%!"
I've given up, basically, haha.
RokofAges75:
Honestly, I like it the way you originally phrased it best: "If you keep looking at me like you want me, I'll have sex with you again right now." It's direct, no cheesy innuendos. I would maybe shorten it to "If you keep looking at me like that, I'll have sex with you again right now." Or "Keep looking at me like that, and I'll fuck your brains out," depending on how crude the character is LOL.
FrickingKaos:
Idk I kinda like the second one LOL
nicksgal:
You're probably right, Julie. I looked at it again while writing it for context for y'all and thought that it actually wasn't half bad. I'll probably go pop it in and see how I feel about it in a week.
Seconds, haha. It was that way for two weeks and it just looked so stupid every time I looked at it.
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