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Featured Story for July 2007 - Pandora's Box by Nick's Gal

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mare:
okay so got that kiddies? NO feeding Dee hot dogs, you should read this one first, unless you have have the ability to float in Dee's brain which might be cool and scary at the same time... and she is trying to convey a message.

Oprah is going to bed now. Thanks for answering all those questions!

nicksgal:
I wish they could float into my brain, then they could tell me where I was going with Chapter Forty-Six. :D

And no, hot dogs are a no no.

Thank you, Oprah, sleep well. :)

honey:

--- Quote from: nicksgal on July 05, 2007, 08:11:43 PM ---Well.... Hmmm... I would probably introduce AJ earlier. But his character and roll is fitting for where he is introduced, so I like how that turned out, but.... He does appear rather late compared to the others.

Well, I'm reworking them because I feel there's some things I didn't address well enough. One that was pointed out to me was what exactly a demon looks like. So I changed that... Minako and Renee also had a lack of sown relationship, so I fixed that.... Just some things here and there I felt could be improved upon. :)

--- End quote ---

I would have liked to get to know him a little better before they all took off together to find the box but you're right, I don't know how you could have introduced him sooner.

nicksgal:
Maybe in my re-writing, I can fix his lack of introductory character development... .

I do think that's another part that could use some work... But, I did fix Nick's introduction, so... I'm pretty happy about that. :)

Purpura Lipstick:
Hot dogs are YUMMY!! *says the pregnant lady*

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