Ok, so I passed the deadline by five days,
BUT I still completed my response to the challenge with a few minor breaking of rules. I totally overshot the 4,000 word count limit by oh lets say 8,387 words
and I managed to leave out the point of one of the boys having to describe a gift given to them by either one of the others or a fan. I know, bad Ashley. Go ahead Mare, slap my hand. Guess I was the major rule breaker for this challenge. But I would really appreciate all the feedback I can get on it. It's my first attempt at writing 1st POV and I think most of the story is pretty dang funny. Then again that may just be me. LoL. Tankies in advance!
"Could Be Worse" --
http://www.absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=8777
