Julie, you had Years of Grace that was from Brian's first person POV, right? I thought that was pretty well done.
I know I've got a story in the works that is Brian's first person POV, and I'm pretty excited because it's definitely different from what I usually write. I feel like, when we romance writers write a story, we end up, unintentionall
y, making the story more centered on how the female feels rather than focusing directly on the Boy. Which makes sense considering we're women and that's who we relate to best.
As far as stories that are first person Boy and romance, I don't think I've ever come across one besides yours, Kelly. I know that one of my many current side stories, Adrift, is Brian's perspective and is half first person, but that's just because I'm experimenting with the first person before I dive completely into it. I have to admit it's not as hard as I thought it would be...but then, I think we could all guess what Brian would think or feel if, one day, his wife told him she thought they needed to be apart LOL Other than that, though, I can't tell ya anything more until I start on my completely brian 1st person story.
However, I think you are doing a fabulous job on IWWAM...and you know how much I could gush about it if you let me
I really do feel like you're capturing his perspective and thoughts really well, while, at the same time, showing his bafflement at Jordan's behavior. Guys, for some reason, are often baffled at female behavior. Wonder why...