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Title: The story of the moment game....
Post by: mare on July 29, 2009, 11:33:21 PM
Not sure if you'd call this a game. More of a fun 'idea' lol

What you need to do is click on the story of the moment which you will find on the AC main page. Not to be confused with the featured story. Those are two different things. The story of the moment is constantly changing.

Click on the story of the moment and go to the first chapter.

Scroll down until you see the first sign of dialogue and then post that dialogue as you see it. Using the entire paragraph of if it's really long at least the first four quotes from it.  

I'm going to give you an example:

Story of the moment: Her Forgiveness by Mel C

The dialogue:

"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

Okay so the next person that posts needs to repost what I just copied and then add their find on the story of the moment list to this one. (Starting a new paragraph please!)
We're going  to end up making one giant conversation based on all these stories lmao should be entertaining and very Mad libs-ish.

Don't forget to mention the story it's coming from either.

If you happen to get the same story just either refresh for a new one or go down to the next set of quotes etc...

Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on July 30, 2009, 12:35:58 AM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.


(The last paragraph is from "Lucky" by Backstreetgirl y.)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: alota_cookin on July 30, 2009, 01:45:00 PM

"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

(last line from The Listener by Jane Eyre)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on July 30, 2009, 02:37:53 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.


(LOL... last line from "Baby's First Christmas" by Lissa)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on July 30, 2009, 03:04:45 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think... [last line from Lose it all by dragonstar]
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: mare on July 30, 2009, 03:23:30 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

(Last line from Wish You Were Mine by Gravity 721
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: Rose on July 30, 2009, 07:17:40 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

(Last Line is from Resurrection by Mare )
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on July 30, 2009, 11:13:21 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.


("Slowing Down Time" by A_broklover)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: MellzBellz on August 01, 2009, 09:15:38 AM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

(One Stormy Night by CartersBitch)


Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on August 01, 2009, 10:04:46 AM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

[chemistry 101 by jenna]
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on August 01, 2009, 03:15:19 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.


("Family Ties" by ResaD)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on August 03, 2009, 09:01:38 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

[Avalon Hotel by  FrickFrack32]
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: honey on August 03, 2009, 09:51:09 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.  [Strange Day at Dance Studio A by Mare]
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on August 04, 2009, 05:01:31 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us. [The price of fame by sorcha]











 
 
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: honey on August 04, 2009, 09:57:38 PM
hey fracktrain... Dialog hun. You're supposed to put the first line of dialog. (That's the stuff in quotes " "  ;) )
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on August 05, 2009, 07:18:44 AM
oh man how could I miss that?  :-[ we could just say I never added that lol
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on August 05, 2009, 10:54:32 AM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us.

"What can I get for you?" A tall and very unattractive bartender asked as he stood on the other side of the bar.

("Unplanned Love" by Jeni)
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: mare on August 05, 2009, 11:21:47 AM
This all reads like we're living inside of Nick's brain! Or at a table reading of a Family Guy episode! lmao
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on August 11, 2009, 01:12:44 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us.

"What can I get for you?" A tall and very unattractive bartender asked as he stood on the other side of the bar.

I gasp. “Nick!”


(I had to add to this cause my story came up as Story of the Moment - "Genesis 2014" by WalkinAlongthe Sky, a.k.a. me!  And LOL... "I'll take Nick, please!  With a side of tense-switching!")
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: RokofAges75 on August 11, 2009, 01:13:58 PM
It's interesting, we have kept a first person narrator for awhile now!  And it's been pretty consistently about Nick LOL.
Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: fracktrain on August 27, 2009, 02:19:14 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us.

"What can I get for you?" A tall and very unattractive bartender asked as he stood on the other side of the bar.

I gasp. “Nick!”

"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us.

"What can I get for you?" A tall and very unattractive bartender asked as he stood on the other side of the bar.

I gasp. “Nick!”

“Oh, great, AJ. My savior,” Nick immediately tries to give Baylee to AJ but the latter refused and so, Howie took the kid instead.

Against all odds [by scarlett]





Title: Re: The story of the moment game....
Post by: ABizzle on August 27, 2009, 07:43:25 PM
"Nick?" He didn't speak, he grabbed her and pulled her into a deep kiss. "I'm sorry, baby. Don't go?", he whispered softly. She pulled away, "how can I forgive you? You cheated on me! You know that was the ONE thing I HATED!", she screamed at him. Tears ran down her face, she didn't know how to react. She was angry and at the same time, happy he came back. Nick came over to her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "I love you, or I wouldn't have come back." Her back tensed, He knew she was crying. "If you loved me you would have never left..." Her voice was full of sorrow. He held her tighter.

“Are you ready for the big day?” David asks her while tapping on her shoulder.

“Store open yet?” she asked.

“Thank you. You’ve been a great audience. Have a happy and safe Holiday.” The Backstreet Boys took a final bow before running off stage.

Nick was once again left alone in the den to think...

“C’mon Nick…do it, say something!” Nick mumbled to himself.

"Hey kid" He moved his hat away from his eyes, now that a man was keeping the glare of the sun off of him. He sat up, leary of returning the greeting. "Hey kid did you hear me?" The man said again now smiling. This made the boy smile. Okay he thought, maybe this guy was nice after all.

“Azizam?” (Darling?) My grandmother walked in and called out. I used my left hand, my right one still on my nose, and held it up to say ‘hold on a second’. I was thankful when I finally found a box of napkins, I took one out quickly.

'Get a grip, Kim. It's only thunder, you'll live.'

Nick Carter tossed a plush brown basketball at his friend. After the ball deflected off his head, Brian bent over and picked the ball up and chucked it back at Nick as hard as he could.

“Babygirl?” I put down my pen and quickly turned around. My eyes lit up and I threw my arms around my cousin.

Nick smirked as he slowly slid his hand free of her grasp, “Maybe I’ll…see you later?”

“Where the hell is Nick?” I remember asking clear as day when we were just about to leave and head back to the hotel.

My family and me aren’t exactly normal, sure we like to think we are but truth be told we aren’t. Many people will assume I’m talking about our jobs but no we are all down to earth about that or at least we like to think we are; some would disagree mainly those who don’t know us.

"What can I get for you?" A tall and very unattractive bartender asked as he stood on the other side of the bar.

I gasp. “Nick!”

“Oh, great, AJ. My savior,” Nick immediately tries to give Baylee to AJ but the latter refused and so, Howie took the kid instead.

"Um, Nick you need anything?" Brian asked, trying to get Nick's attention. ("Master's Pet" by Kagoma)