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Fic Talk => Writer's Circle => Beta Central => Topic started by: TheDistantHeart on September 02, 2010, 05:33:56 AM

Title: Ice Cold Blood
Post by: TheDistantHeart on September 02, 2010, 05:33:56 AM
Just wondering if anyone could beta read my fanfic Ice Cold Blood. I know I'm not a complete horror at grammar and spelling (cause I'm a grammar and spelling nazi myself LOL).
I'm just wondering if there are certain sentence constructions that should be fixed, or maybe some punctuation or lay-out concerning paragraphs.

Even when there are grammar/spelling mistakes, I'd love to know!