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« Reply #360 on: May 17, 2019, 07:45:41 PM »

Enjoyed the new chapter!  I liked the tension in the scene with Brian and Nick riding with JC and Justin.  Everything is starting to come out now (except Brian - ha!).  Keep the updates coming! Smiley
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« Reply #361 on: May 18, 2019, 03:01:40 AM »

If I Knew Then has been updated to Chapter 17!!!

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« Reply #362 on: May 18, 2019, 10:27:17 AM »

Ooh, I loved this chapter!  From the conversation with the rest of the Boys about Lou to the confrontation between Leighanne and Brian at the end, it was dramatic and entertaining. You do a great job writing dialogue. I can't wait to see how Brian reacts to Leighanne's ultimatum!
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« Reply #363 on: May 18, 2019, 10:53:04 PM »

I actually really enjoyed writing this chapter, I spent all night last night writing that scene with Brian and Leighanne. Thank you for the compliment as well, I tend to do better with dialogue than I do with descriptions, at least I feel that way. I think I've gotten much better over the years with it.

I am about to start Chapter 18. If my momentum keeps up, I might be updating on Sunday or Monday. Thanks for the feedback
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« Reply #364 on: May 24, 2019, 12:19:31 AM »

Chapter 18 of If I Knew Then is now posted. Sorry for the late update. I meant to post this Monday but I've had a lot going on personally and my creativity is not what it should be right now.
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« Reply #365 on: Today at 10:21:26 AM »

I loved Chapter 18!  The conversation between Brian and Leighanne was great; I'm glad she stuck to her guns, and I'm glad she and Nick helped convince Brian to finally go to the doctor.  Does Nick not know about Brian's congenital heart condition?  I always wondered if that was something Brian ever talked about before he found out he needed surgery or not until he had to.
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