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[yorkielover88]

When writing in first person should / do you write in past tense or uh... how do you say this correctly... current tense? lol.

[RokofAges75]

It's really up to you.  Past tense is what most stories are written in, as if the narrator is telling a story that has already happened, but some writers use present tense, as if the story is playing out right now.  I think present tense sounds less awkward in first person than in third.  It's still not my favorite, but I've used it before for short stories.

[Sakabelle]

I tend to write in past tense in first person, when you're talking about an event that happened in the past. Like.. "When I walked into the living room, I saw Nick sitting on the couch." Because that is in the past and part of the events the character is retelling.

But I will use present tense when it's something the character could still be feeling/thinking, even if it relates to what happened in the past So.. "When I walked into the living room, I saw Nick sitting on the couch. That guy is so lazy."

Who knows if that's right LOL but that's what I do.

[RokofAges75]

^ That's what I do too.  I think that's right.  It makes sense, anyway, cause first person is like someone telling a story... so when you're telling something that has already happened, you use past tense, but when you say something about yourself or someone else that's still true, you say it in present.  It sounds a little awkward sometimes to switch back and forth, but it would also sound awkward to say "That guy was so lazy."  Well, is he not lazy anymore??  Or did he die, or what? LOL  Why isn't he lazy now?

[yorkielover88]

yeah see like.... I'm working with Sapphire on a fan fic where I am useing 1st person for the first time and I find myself wanting to do a little of both.


Like... writing them watching someone say something to someone else but then writing what they are thinking.

exp:

I watched as Nick walked right up to Kevin. They where almost nose to nose.

Nick, with a clenched jaw, then said, "When are you gonna grow some balls and take off the leash Kristin has you on?"

Did he really just say that to Kevin?

I was blown away by Nick's braveness.

[RokofAges75]

That sounds fine.  "Were," not "where" - otherwise, looks good.  The tense is perfect.

[Sakabelle]

Yup, tense looks good to me too! That's pretty much exactly what I would have done. Because "Did he really just say that to Kevin?" is the thought the character would have had at the time, at least in my mind. Makes sense to me!

[alota_cookin]

I mix the tenses, too. I primarily write in past but put a lot of present in, too...dependin g on what flows the best. Usually, I just go with what I think sounds right and then hope everyone else thinks it does, too. LOL!