In response to the feedback question, I have gotten comments like that on Finding Carter. Some felt that I should have explained the reason for Brian and Nick being together more, and I was a little disappointed that some seemed to stop reading after that. If they'd just waited, they would see i have a reason for not revealing that right away.
I almost stopped writing it at that point, but i decided to keep going because I like writing it, not for the feedback but because I like the story idea.