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Author Topic: These Five Words  (Read 2270 times)

starbeamz

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These Five Words
« on: November 04, 2007, 04:19:27 PM »
I feel like I should be called the Queen of Shameless Plugs, but I'm shamelessly plugging myself...Again LOL

I started this story as an exercise in first person writing and thought I'd post it. It's basically a Nick and Brian story because I love Frick and Frack ;D It's only going to be three or so chapters long, and it's got NOTHING to do with romance, which is surprising coming from me LOL Either way, if you have time, let me know how I'm doing with first person because, personally, it's the hardest thing for me to write.

Here's the link:

http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=8676
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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2007, 06:44:10 PM »
Thanks for reading, Mare! I just never know if I'm writing out their thoughts exactly the way each of them would think. First person and characterizati on, I should say, are my two big problems in writing...
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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2007, 08:36:49 PM »
It's hard to write first person but I really think that's what helps people capture their characters best. LOL I know for me when I first wrote a story in first person I had to go back and fix things because I would find myself randomly going back into third person without even realizing it.
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Writing is something you do alone. Its a profession for introverts who want to tell you a story but don't want to make eye contact while doing it. ~ John Green

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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2007, 01:29:28 AM »
Wow, this writing in first person deal isn't so bad. Now I have all these ideas for writing in first person!

Oh, and, also, I posted chapter 3 of 4 for These Five Words.

You get 5000 bonus points if you can guess where the title comes from LOL
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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #4 on: November 08, 2007, 02:28:50 AM »
I'll Be There For You by Bon Jovi?

"These five words I swear to you cuz I'll be there for you!" is the line I believe lol.


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Angel: "Spike.... just walk away"
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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2007, 03:37:57 PM »
'Kay. I updated the fourth and final chapter of this story! It was a fun little exercise in first person, and writing from Brian's perspective was nice. It also made me start yet another story, this time in Brian's first person POV! I really am starting to like it!

Oh, and Teri. You were right about the song. LOL I wonder how many other people got that reference...
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Re: These Five Words
« Reply #6 on: November 12, 2007, 05:03:56 PM »
lol Yay! I'm a bon jovi fan so when I saw it i was like AH HA!
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Spike: "Hey big guy I'm going to need some new wheels the other one ended up in the...drink..."
Angel: "Spike.... just walk away"
Spike: "You're a..."
Angel: "Don't say it!"
Spike: "You're a bleeding puppet!"