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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #675 on: September 02, 2019, 07:35:27 AM »
Well you shouldn't have worried about how people would react as I'm sure everyone else is loving it as much as me and Tracy are :)

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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #676 on: September 02, 2019, 04:23:23 PM »
So far the reactions have been good!  Thanks! :)

I had the day off work today, so I just posted Chapter 32.  Enjoy!
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #677 on: September 03, 2019, 08:13:51 AM »
Yay, I've got a quiet afternoon in work to read it :)
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #678 on: September 03, 2019, 08:51:05 AM »
OK so now I know I was right from the start and that Dani did something to him in that bar which led him to have heart failure.  I bet she isn't pregnant either, or if she is, it's not Nick's and she's just pretending.  I knew something wasn't right and didn't trust her at all, but then I began to wonder if I'd been wrong, now I know I wasn't and to trust my initial instinct.

Poor guys, how awful for them both to be so utterly helpless in this place and at the hands of these weirdo evil medical killers!

My heart felt like it was beating faster as I read it, poor Nick, being given a drug that gives him heart failure when he was perfectly healthy before.  So cruel and twisted.

I wonder if anyone will find them before he ends up with Brian's heart and Brian ends up as Patrick's new plaything?

Enjoying this so much as always and can't wait for more :)
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #679 on: September 03, 2019, 07:48:38 PM »
Thank you!!  Yes, your intuition was correct.  You'll get more info on what/how/why in the next chapter.  I love that you had that reaction!  This is definitely up there in terms of sick and twisted things I've written, and the worst is yet to come.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks, Steph!
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #680 on: September 06, 2019, 01:09:57 PM »
33 is up!  It's a long one, full of info.  Enjoy!
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #681 on: September 06, 2019, 05:06:15 PM »
Oh my god, so they have a fetish porn site! I wonder what else the police will find on there? Or is that how Elizabeth recruited them?

So now we know what I knew in the start, that Dani drugged him.  But wonder about Brian? I'm guessing he was injected with something as soon as he got in the car :(

I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm sure it will be torture for them though, especially now the game is up and they know they aren't in a real hospital.

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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #682 on: September 07, 2019, 09:23:29 PM »
LOL Yes, yes they do!  You totally called it about Dani drugging him in the beginning, and you may be right about Brian too.  Thanks for the feedback, as always!
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #683 on: September 11, 2019, 11:28:46 PM »
I KNEW DANI WAS FULL OF SHIT. called that in the beginning. I feel so proud of myself. I kept seeing you were updating on Twitter and it was killing me not being able to read them while on my cruise. So I was excited to be able to catch up and boy was those last two chapters a doozy. Medical porn, huh. Lmao. That is something else. I cant wait to see what else you've cooked up now that the boys did their investigation on what was going on. Now all the pieces are coming together. I just hope they find the boys before they're stitched together lol
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #684 on: September 14, 2019, 05:26:44 PM »
You totally did!  You should be proud; I'm impressed!  Thanks for catching up and commenting!  Medical porn indeed LOL.  I accidentally discovered this was a thing by researching for fanfic a long time ago.  I have since learned this is Rule #34 of the internet - there is literally porn for EVERYTHING.

I laughed so hard at "before they're stitched together."  This was not part of the original plan, but now you're giving me ideas... haha!

Btw, Chapter 34 is up, and it's the dooziest one of all!
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #685 on: September 17, 2019, 12:52:00 PM »
Wow, so Dani is just as fucked up in the head as Elizabeth and Patrick! I knew she was bad news from the start. 

Can't believe she actually had sex with him while he was being shocked by his ICD, that is seriously messed up and I love it lol.  Poor Brian hearing it all and being unable to move or respond in any way.

I just hope the police find them before they are finished with their medical fetish playthings and want new boy toys! The pair of them are sick in the head lol

Can't wait for more :)
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #686 on: September 18, 2019, 07:28:01 PM »
LOL Yes she is.  That scene was one of those "OMG, that is so fucked up, I can't write that" ideas I had, which meant of course I had to write it - because she IS that sick in the head.  Thanks, Steph!

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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #687 on: September 20, 2019, 10:37:52 PM »
Omfg Julie you are so bad.

I mean... I loved the chapter but that was so twisted that she pretty much raped him while he was getting shocked lol

I can't wait to see how this one goes because I love it.
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #688 on: September 21, 2019, 02:34:09 PM »
LOL I know; this was one of those times when my own mind scares me.  Like yeah, she is super twisted, but she is also my creation and is just doing the creepy things I come up with for her to do.  Other than Song for the Undead and a few challenge stories, I really haven't written much horror, so writing all this twisted stuff in a serious way is kind of new for me.  Thanks for reading it and loving it!

Btw, I just added Chapter 35.
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Re: Julie's Update Junction
« Reply #689 on: September 22, 2019, 01:23:22 PM »
Great chapter, was good to get a bit more background story on Dani.  I don't know which one of them is most crazy though!  They all are lol

And that part at the end where she said he'd been wonderful, oh god, those poor boys are in for a lot more torture before they are done I'm sure :( Brian being forced to watch too, they are so sick!

Can't wait for more :)
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