Date: 04/17/09 01:50 pm Title: Fate
Wow, that scene with Howie on the raft was just totally amazing, so romantic and perfect, I wanted to swim out there and have some of that too, lol.
As for Leighanne and Cindy's Mom, I really think Leighanne is like some kind of fairy godmother, she just has this way with people that instantly makes them like her.
Wonder how things will work out with Hal? OK, back to reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/07 05:02 am Title: Fate
Okay I have tears in my eyes! This is such a powerful chapter. It's like reading one of my favorite books. You write very well...and I can't believe I haven't told you that yet. But girl I am tellin you now you are good. There is only one other person who could get me to tear up like this reading fanfic!
Author's Response: Wow! That is like a huge compliment, Thank you so much! It really means a lot. I really would like to publish something some day. (if I could ever escape BSB fanfics) But I've never had any writing classes or anything like that and always worry just how good my writing really is. I mean writing fan fic is one thing, but writing a real novel, thats intimidating. As always, thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 10:15 am Title: Fate
lol
i love it ^.^
great story!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad! Are you just joining us on this one? We're getting to the good stuff now! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 04:59 am Title: Fate
please please update soon....
Author's Response: I know, I know. I was sick and then I was updaten my other one cause it'd been so long. But I haven't forgotten and I finally have the rest of this story all planned out so it shouldn't be long now. Like 3 chapters is all that's left. Kind of sad but kind of exciting as well. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Sorry to have made you wait. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/09/07 11:41 pm Title: Fate
yay for the mom and hal! :)
Author's Response: That's what I think. lol! Just wait, so much more to come in such few chapters! **rubs hands out of anticipation**
is it bad that I totally love this story too? -lol
[Report This]Date: 02/08/07 01:45 am Title: Fate
It was excellent!! I love the twisted happy course of fate that is goin on she deserved it especially her mom with all the abuse she endure...
Author's Response: I'm soo glad you put it like that! "A twisted happy course of fate" I really think that's how Cindy feels and I hope the readers are feeling as overwhelmed by it all as she is! The point is for the reader to take the ride along with her. I hope that's happening... at least a tiny bit!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/07 08:58 pm Title: Fate
Aww... I am so loving this story! I'm not much of a romantic, but even I'm going AWW! Guess its cuz its not as sugarcoated and cliched as other fan fics out there.
I still wanna know though how Cindy and Nick wound up sleeping together LOL I'm curious!
Author's Response: I debated on and off about explaining that from the begining. (about exactly what happened that night) I even had the whole thing planned out, but the more I thought about it, this story is being told by "Cindy" not the author so in the end I had to go with what she could piece together and after trying to spend so much time in Cindy'd head, I really think she would decide not to exactly know. Not if she's trying to move forward... Does that make sense? But, WOW! I am flattered that a non romance lover such as yourself actually said "Aww!" Yea! I don't understand how oyou ever made it all the way through WTMH then. -lol. But thank you for your comment. I'm glad I was successful at stepping outside the romance cliche. Normally I'm the reason for the cliche!!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/07 06:26 am Title: Fate
loved the chapter... i really hope cindy takes howie offer to go to florida... cant wait till the next chapter and soon
Author's Response: hmm... I kinda hope she does too, unfortunately I can't control her. lol. Cindy took over this story a Loooong time ago!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/07 05:31 am Title: Fate
Wowzers!!!! A WHOLE lot of good shit is happenin'!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Yes, MARRY HOWIE!!!!! Whoot!!! And I bet A.J. was the friend who liked the spiked coffee.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: yup. After going through AJ, I'm sure Leighanne (and the rest of them) have an idea of how to handle someone like Cindy's mom. Plus, you know, Leigh is PERFECT in this story.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/07 12:32 am Title: Fate
Wow.. everything seems to be turning around for Cindy.. I'm excited that Hal is gonna talk to her mom.. I seriously thought that Cindy's mom was gonna kick Leighanne out or something bad.. lol Looooved it, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Well, Leighanne is part fairy godmother ;) and they have magical powers! The moode has to be perfect for the ball!!! Yea for balls! -lol that sounded bad. You know what I meant. :)
