Reviewer: Kandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/07 05:43 am Title: Shattered Dreams

I'm in total shock with this chapter. It was a good chapter and you did a good job with it. I just hope that her and her mother are okay.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/07 01:06 am Title: Shattered Dreams

OMG NO awesome chapter omg

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/07 09:12 pm Title: Shattered Dreams

Oh crap girl this was an excellent chapter all with emaotion and terrifying things that happen but tell you the truth I kindve skimpped through cause I do not like vision that I would've have if I read it. and eventhouh I skip I have to say darn even skipping I could know what strong things were happening and it didn't let me move on until I read it to the end. Do I make any sense lol! Well Nena Greast job!

Author's Response: yeah, I don't blame you for skimming. Although I've read much worse in other stories... That's why I gave the warning first. :) Normally I'm much more the sappy, romance stuff myself, but I've been trying so hard to try something different for me. It was really hard for me to write that chapter and I was so nervous about it. But I'm glad I did it. This whole story has really helped my writing. I know I've learned from the expierence, but I don't know that I'll continue writing this type of thing in the future. It's really not my thing ya know? I'm with you on not wanting the visuals. I think I'll stick to pg-13. Thanks though. I'm glad you still gave it a chance, and like I said, even if you'd have not read it at all, you'll still be able to enjoy the end. (which is close) I've only got a chapter and a half left to write!!) Hopefully I'll get it up soon! After that I don't know... Probably "Whitmore Lake" and "The Day I Fall" Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Veronica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/07 10:53 pm Title: Shattered Dreams

=O You know I want more... and I think it's safe to say I want it NOOOOWWW... lol Oh you know I loved it and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Jacs Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/07 03:57 pm Title: Shattered Dreams

Love it!!! I cannot wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Ah, a new face! (well name) Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like it! Don't worry I don't usually make you wait too long for updates. Especially not after a chapter like that. The end is near so... keep reading! Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/07 10:23 am Title: Shattered Dreams

*gasps* OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! I was SO right!!!!! Well, so far.....EEEP!!!! OMG!!!! LEIGHANNE HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO GET THE DAMNED COPS!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! DAMMIT!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS HOWIE WHEN YOU NEED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST - ARGH!!!!! LEMME KILL THOSE BASTARDS!!!!!! LEMME AT 'EM!!!!!!!!!

*aj holds me back as I struggle to be let loose & wreak havoc*

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: lol Lenni, I love you!