Date: 07/18/10 06:07 am Title: Chapter 28
Damn you Brian..!! :) Sorry, I know these reviews aren't very constructive. I'll try to post better ones from here out! This chapter is... very hot! :D Great writing. I love this story, by the way.
Author's Response: Actually I love your reviews :) I love people's reactions...WTB is always going to be near and dear to my heart but you actually have made me bring it up and re-read a chapter here and there too to refresh MY memory. :)
Date: 07/18/10 05:47 am Title: Chapter 26
...Now I'm very frightened and YouTubing to see if you made that video up... lmao.
Date: 07/18/10 05:01 am Title: Chapter 20
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh....... Hunterrrrrrrr........ grrrr. Well at least now he can't be pissed when she breaks up with him. grrruff.
Date: 07/18/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter 19
God I wanted them to go for it right there, but I like that you made Nick stop. That shows the respect he has for her. It was a really nice touch. And the note is great. I'm kind of scared of how Hunter's going to react, though... I've got a feeling it's not going to be that easy.
Author's Response: I just realized there are way more reviews that you wrote for me that I never even saw. So I just want to say thank you for making me laugh at work because I'm enjoying reading through your comments!
Date: 07/18/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 18
Yay! *heart fluttering* Oh but now Hunter's gonna come back soon.. ugh you're killing me, they're so perfect together.
Date: 07/17/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Nice scene between Brian and Liv! :)
Author's Response: I <3 Bri. :)
Date: 07/17/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
LMAO @ Donkey Kong & dangerous bras. Genius.
Date: 07/17/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
The fire alarm! Where on earth do you think this stuff up? Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: LoL man it's been a long time since I typed this chapter but I STILL remember the fire alarm. :) That was one of my favorite scenes.
Date: 07/07/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
holy smoke, 5 or 6 sories and i'm not done with the first one lol
great so far
Author's Response: Hey, they're not going to go anywhere! Just enjoy the stories :)
Date: 07/01/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love, love, love, love, love, L O V E the Playland visual. That was pure genius.
You're doing great at hooking me to wonder what's up with Nick, too. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Pengi...that's so much for reviewing! My first story is always going to be near and dear to my heart and I hope to read more of your reactions as you get farther along. :)
Date: 07/01/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love the interview! That was hilarious. I could practically hear the answers.
Date: 07/01/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I decided to give this a read because of it being selected to be the featured story on the boards... I gotta say, though, I love the first chapter. Liv is believable, and the ad for the internship is a creative idea to link her to the Boys! I'm wondering about this Hunter guy, too... I don't want him to get in the way of Liv's experience! I'm gonna keep reading... lol
Date: 06/08/10 02:20 am Title: Chapter 7
I just started reading this story tonight, and I am LOVING it so far! I am pretty picky about romance, and this kind of premise doesn't usually attract my attention, but I'd heard such rave reviews about this story that I had to give it a try and see what it was all about. I am hooked!! Your writing is excellent, which is what it's all about. You do a great job writing in first person, which isn't easy! The narrative is funny and draws you right in. Olivia as a main character is very real and relatable - I love that! I enjoy reading about her even when the Boys aren't in the scene, and I like that she's married - that's gonna present some great drama later on, I can tell! It's been a LONG time since I've sat and read this many consecutive chapters of a new fanfic in one sitting purely for enjoyment, and I've missed that! Thanks for writing a story worth reading! I'll leave more reviews as I get further into it and catch up, but just wanted to let you know I'm loving it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review! I LOVE writing in first person, for Olivia's voice is probably the easiest one I've been able to really define in a long time. Of course, I think the chapters that shine are the ones that include the Boys - I like many others think fanfics shouldn't stray too far away from the main purpose - to be ABOUT the Boys. I look foward to future comments as you get farther along in the story. :)
Date: 06/03/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 70
omg........love this story!!!!! canyt wait to read the next series!!!!
Author's Response: I look forward to your reviews on Cruise Control!
Date: 06/01/10 04:26 am Title: Chapter 70
I just sat here and read the entire story and it's wonderful! I was soo glad that the baby is Nick's, I actually teared up at the possiblilty it might not be. I can't wait to read the next story. :)
Author's Response: I look forward to your comments on Cruise Control! Glad you're enjoying the saga :)
