Date: 08/26/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter Ten
Lily looked between the two as a silence fell over them. “So,” she spoke up, clearing her throat, “how long are you going to be visiting with Alex, Mrs…um, Alex’s mom?”
Date: 08/25/10 05:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Well at least he made the effort. And she's right, he needs to do it for himself, not for her, or the baby. Great stuff can't wait to read more! :-D
Author's Response: Thank you :) Let's hope he listens to her and gets that help. And yes, points to Alex for making the effort.
Date: 08/24/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I really like Lily, lol.
Dun, dun, dun.. enter Denise: Stage Right. This should be interesting.
Date: 08/24/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Wow, Renee is evil. But that's no big surprise.
Brie needs to stop blaming herself, she's gotta realize she didn't impregnate herself with his sperm - he was there, too. He made the decision to pick her up and sleep with her, knowing this was a remote possibility.
Also, I already told you this, but - too bad Lily has a fiance, she and Nick could hook up and plot evil things against Renee. Tee Hee.
Date: 08/24/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Seven
*makes Laurel disappear* ahh, that's better. :D
Stupid Renee, I see your tricks you skank, lol. Good chapter, his house sounds familiar lol.
Date: 08/23/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Yay!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!! :) Makes me happy (and kind of depressed that stuff doesn't happen like that in real life! haha). I loved the update and glad at least Alex has finally admitted having feelings now it's Bri's turn. I can't wait to see what happens next when they go back to LA and Bri starts her job and all of that fun stuff! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Aww LOL I feel you there. Wish real life was easy as fiction. Thanks so much for the feedback though. And yes, Alex laid himself out there, Brie needs to return the favor. :) Can't wait for you to read what's to come. Thanks again!
Date: 08/23/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Yeaaah! AJ showed up in NY and they kissed haha...awesome.
They still got a lot to talk about but at least the beginning is there.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hehe glad you liked that. Yes, there's lots to cover, but you're right...the beginning is there. Thanks so much!
Date: 08/21/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Somehow I knew he was going to show up in NY. Great chapter and I hope you have an update soon. :)
Author's Response: Aww you figured me out. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Date: 08/21/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Another great chapter! I amso glad AJ went to NYC to see Brielle! Hope everything works out for them
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think it was best he went. Now maybe they can figure some things out. :)
Date: 08/21/10 05:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
LOL no you didn't scare me away!!! I love this story!!! like i said i've been busy, but i'm in LA now, so i should have more time.
Another great chapter. They are so cute together. I'm so happy to see Alex trying to make things work. But i have a feeling Renee isnt done with him yet, but that's okay Brie will take care of her lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aww yay, so glad you're still here. Woot for LA; one day I'm gonna definitely visit there. How's the weather? And thank you for the review. :) You may be right about Renee, she doesn't seem the type to give up easily.
Date: 08/21/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Oh Lord... so their issues have an ending they must do that talk, all or nothing, now or never.... Lord... I'm in love with him! All those words, he was so sincere and awwwwww *sighs* Brie.... And that New Year's kiss.. awwww They SURELY loves each other, and that 'I miss him' and he shows up! Awww the elevator! Everything! GO ALEX! GO BRIE!!!
The absence makes the heart grow fonder.... PERFECT!!!
Now the 2011 will start with a lill love? *wins*
Author's Response: Aww hehe thank you for your review. I have to say that I love your excitement and eagerness and it really motivates me to get the chps out to you faster. Glad you loved the kiss, wasn't sure how it'd be taken after their discussion...but it's New Years and you have to have midnight kiss. They'll definitely talk because they both know they need to. And let's hope 2011 starts with some love. :)
Date: 08/21/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Another amazing chapter. I love how well Lily can read Brielle, knowing that she didn't come out to NYC for no reason. lol I definitely didn't expect AJ to show up at the party, but I'm glad that he and Brielle talked. When he pushed the emergency stop button in the elevator it reminded me of the lyrics to "Poster Girl". LOL That convo took so many turns that I wasn't sure where it was going to end up. I just hope that they can work things out and be there for each other because they obviously need each other and they definitely have something keeping them together besides the baby.
Great job, thanks so much for another update. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, Lily knows Brielle probably better than Brielle knows herself lol. I surprised you with AJ lol I thought most people would figure it out hehe so I'm glad I was able to surprise you. LOL @ it reminding you of Poster Girl. Now every time I hear that song it's going to remind me of that scene. I hope I didn't confuse you too much with the convo between them, hopefully this next chp will help straighten things out. Thanks so much!
Date: 08/21/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
FINALLY! now can they go to his hotel and screw around? Not like he can knock her up again LMAO
Author's Response: LMAO that made me laugh out loud for reals. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/20/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Another great chapter. I hope AJ does something before she decides to move out, that wont be good for him if she moves out.. He really wont have anyone to be his rock when he wants to drink.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! AJ doesn't wanna lose his rock, so he better do something quick. Let's hope he does. :)
Date: 08/17/10 05:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Ok I do have to say I am slow in leaving feedback...but FYI your writing is awesome and I love this story. I hope she does move out it will help I am sure. keep them coming. :)
Author's Response:
Aww that's alright, at least you leave them. :) I appreciate it. And thank you for all your wonderful words. They really keep me motivated. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic and can't wait for you to read the next update. :) Thanks again!