Date: 08/16/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters I've been busy. I'm getting ready to move to LA.
Anywhoo great chapter. I can't wait to see what AJ will do when he finds out she's leaving. I'm glad he's taken a step in the right direction. I hope things work out for them both. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Ooh moving to LA, that's awesome! Thank you for taking a minute to leave me a review. I've been wondering if the direction this fic is going scared you off lol. Glad to hear it didn't. :)
Date: 08/16/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Good chapter! I think maybe Brie should just stay at a hotel for a couple of weeks, no need for her to get her own place! Haha! And I still think Renee was never pregnant and maybe if AJ figures that out, he'll be better... Really we just need Renee out of the picture. Hmmm, maybe AJ could surprise Brie and fly out to NYC for NYE too? I don't know, maybe not a good idea? Thanks for the update it really brightened my crappy Monday morning! I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you! If Renee was out of the picture, where would all the drama come from? LOL. You need to read my next chp; have you been taking peeks at my notes? I'm glad I could brighten up your day! Your review helped brighten mine. :)
Date: 08/16/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
So she's leaving? Hmm Alex is not going to be happy about that. He should use everything in his power to make her stay hihi.
Thanks for the update! I hope this motivates you to wright some more soon ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! It really did help motivate me and I was able to update again. Hope you enjoy the next chp and are able to offer some more feedback. :)
Date: 08/16/10 09:40 am Title: Chapter Three
“Mom,” Alex rubbed the bridge of his nose, “if this is about Renee, please don’t start.”
“This isn’t about Renee,” she suddenly snapped. “Not everything is, you know.”
haha oooh.. go Denise!
Touché and not to mention, rarr. <- lol love that line.
Author's Response:
LOL, thank you! Glad you're finally reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 08/16/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter Two
What a dog. But considering the subject..... lol.
Poor Brie.. it's just one bad turn after another.
Author's Response:
LOL. When can a girl get a break?
Date: 08/16/10 09:11 am Title: Chapter One
So, here I am! I woke up early (of course, after going to sleep way too early.. heh) and I was bored. I thought about watching some Buffy/Angel reruns, and almost did, until I remembered, "Hey! I need to go read Summer's stories." So be proud!
Good job on making Benjamin Lutkas a jerk, I mean, seriously. She should've smacked him in the head with her stuff, lol.
And awww, Lily's a sweet friend.
Great start, now I'm off to read another chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL yay *claps* glad you could make it! Hope you'll enjoy all the wonderful goodness. :)
Date: 08/16/10 05:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I really like this story so far. Can't wait for the next soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm glad you let me know. I hope you'll enjoy the next chps.
Date: 08/16/10 04:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
so far ive been really enjoying your story, just i feel it in a "stand still" i geuss its just untill aj decides if he needs help or not?...but good job so far
Author's Response:
A stand still ... that gave me something to ponder about. I don't know if I saw it in a stand still because I had stuff going on in each chapter but I do understand what you were meaning and why you might think that way. I'm glad you let me know, it definitely helps a writer when they can get different view points and opinions about their work. At least in my case it does. I hope you'll continue to read and let me know how you feel. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, it might be looked at as finally moving forward. Let me know! Thanks again! :)
Date: 08/15/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
and PS I think the only reason people won't like this story is if they haven't come to terms with the fact that AJ is drinking again in real life. He has said so himself and if he needs a designated driver which he has also said in interviews, that is gonna upset fans. However, I think you doing a story like this is good for the fans that actually give a shit about his wellbeing. /end rant
Date: 08/15/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
WHAT the fuck? Ok seriously, he better tie her to a chair and duct tape her mouth and then he better tell her how he feels and she better not accept it as being ok but be willing to help him if he asks her for it. Oh yeah and she's not allowed off the chair til she agrees not to move out! GRRRRRR what are you trying to do to me?!
Author's Response:
LOL Tie her to a chair and duct tape her mouth; wouldn't that be considered kidnapping? I'm just trying to get you riled up lol, but I think you'll like the next chapter. Maybe he can untie her and let her off the chair lol. Thanks again! :)
Date: 08/15/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I LOVE this story, you know that hun!
I think Brie is right with her thoughts, she needs to step out a lill bit, so ALex can feel the reality. Poor guys.... Denise isn't at a easy road too, know too much isn't cool, sometimes.
So he will be ALL by himself... mom's coming back to Florida, Brie will got o New York... I think he will do something.... not the drink (oh well, or will, so he can see him with her eyes).
I hope Kev can help him with his issues.
Brie had grow up so much!
Oooh and the journal: beautiful start!
Author's Response:
Aww I know you do and I appreciate all your wonderful feedback! Thank you for your thoughts on how it's going and I do think you're right with how he feels. I'm looking forward to seeing what you think about the next chapter. :)
Date: 08/15/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Well to be completely honest, I don't like what you are doing to him, or both of them and where you are taking this. Ii makes me very sad when I read it. But I love your stories and your writing and I NEED to know what happens next. LOL... You are very gifted and amazing at this. I love all your stories. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Aww I'm sorry to make you sad. :( I really appreciate that you told me how you felt. It helps me look at things different when I get other views on my writing. I'm able to take a step back and look over the work sort of like an outsider. I hope you like the next chapter though and even if you don't care for the direction it took, let me know. Thank you for taking some time to leave your thoughts. And thank you for your sweet words on my writing. :)
Date: 08/15/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Another great chapter. :) I think that Brielle's visit to Lily is a good idea, a chance for her to remove herself from the situation and to figure out what she's going to do about AJ and this whole mess with his drinking, Renee, and her pregnancy and everything else. lol
I liked Denise and Brielle's discussion, maybe it will help with the decisions that she has to make about everything.
I also like that Brielle is being firm with AJ, not letting him break her so easily into forgiving him because he needs to realize the consequences of his actions and decisions and the effect that they have on others. But when you're an addict and in your addiction, you don't care about that.
Phew...sorry about the rant, but I don't mind if any of this helps you in some way. As always, can't wait for another chapter. :D
Author's Response:
First, let me thank you for all your faithful reviews. :) Second, that's exactly why Brielle wanted to go visit Lily. And yes, Brielle definitely doesn't want to let AJ walk all over her or control her emotions. She's trying to make him realize he needs help. And as you know, addicts only get help when they truly want it.
PS. I didn't mind your rant one bit. :) I can't wait to read your thoughts on the next chp. Thanks again!
Date: 08/15/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Great story, and another great update! Your story has been on my favorite list since the beginning and I'm absolutely hooked! I love all the drama and romance put together. Brielle and AJ make a great couple, and all the difficulties on their way to be together just makes their love story even more beautiful and interesting to follow! Keep up the awesome job! ~~Tabata.
P.S: I hate Renee, and Brielle's mother. Awesome vilains you got there, lol!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. And thanks for the review. :) I really like what you said about all of what's going on making their love story even more beautiful and interesting to follow. That's a really neat way to look at it. Thank you. :)
PS. I try to make them despisable. So far I think I'm succeeding. Thanks for letting me know. :)
Date: 08/11/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
she shoulda beat him! I wanna see what big guns he pulls out to make this up to her...and I kinda hope they don't get together just yet....I'm enjoying this story too much to see it go too quickly!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. :) LOL, if he keeps being such an ass then she might take a swing or two. And yeah, he definitely has a lot of making up to do.
