Date: 07/27/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Lost the baby, my ass!!! She's a lying little bitch!!! And now her lying is causing him to go back to drinking!! geez, I am not happy right now, although it's not like I didn't see it coming but still!!! I need an update like soon so I can see how this unfolds.
Author's Response:
Aww I'm sorry to upset you lol. On a happy note, I did update! Thank you :)
Date: 07/27/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Wow, what a chapter. I like the journal gift from Brielle to AJ. Did Renee REALLY lose the baby or was there no baby to begin with? Inquiring minds want to know. ;) Oh boy, now AJ's gonna go get wasted...this will not end well. Great job, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I can't take the credit for the gift idea, that was all Gabby. I wish I could tell you what the truth is with Renee and the whole pregnancy thing, but I can't. I promise though if you keep reading, you will find out. Thanks!
Date: 07/27/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Well the begiging was great! Christmas is the best! LOL....
It's very sad that she lost the baby. Hopefully she will be okay. I see another bender coming though. Hopefully something bad won't happen as a result.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I think Christmas is great too! As for there being another bender ...you're pretty spot on.
Date: 07/27/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Hmmm...I have a funny feeling, but I don't want to say anything out loud. Good chapter and plz keep the updates coming!
Author's Response:
I'm dying to know what you're thoughts are that you won't admit. I hope once it's safe to say them you will let me know. :) Thank you for the review and hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 07/26/10 04:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Awww, great update! :) I loved every bit of it. Yay for Bri getting some money and finally figuring out what her parents were up to! Although she really need to get with Alex, I mean come on!!!! I can't wait for the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. :) And yes, now she has some money so she can survive on her own.
Date: 07/25/10 08:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
thanks for another great chapter!!!!! and it's true... her parents came to L.A., just because brielle has inherited money...(WOW 800,000 dollars!!!!)... i'm glad, that eric has told her about their true intentions!!!! it must have a big disapointment for brielle... even if she suspected, that they are only here, because they want something... i think maybe brielle hoped, they are really here, because they take care for her and the baby... after all they are her parents :( send them home was the best decision...
ohhh alex... he thinks, brielle is not interested in him??? he must open his eyes and then he will see that she is only anxious and uncertain and who can blame her...
i wonder what renee now intends... i'm sure, she won't give up so easily and plots revenge...
can't wait for more...please update!!!! MEL=)
PS: if i'll ever let fly a kite (and that will i do), i will be careful... thanks for your tips ;)
Author's Response:
You're so welcome! And thank you for a wonderful review. :) And you're very right with Brielle's feelings and thoughts on her parents being there. She had to do what was best for her and her baby and sending them home was that. And you're so spot on with Brielle being anxious and uncertain. Renee's intentions are going to be coming to surface soon so stay tuned. Thanks so much! And you're welcome with the kite flying tips. :)
Date: 07/24/10 07:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
OMG she is such an idiot. He basically asked her out and she shot him down!
Author's Response:
I know lol, but she has her reasons. Just keep reading, there's lots to come. :)
Date: 07/24/10 05:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Great chapter.. Sad to hear about her parents and only wanting the money... I think she did the right thing and sent them packing.. Can't wait for another chapter!
Author's Response:
It's hard when parents are really parents. She sure did do the right thing. Thanks so much for your review. :)
Date: 07/24/10 01:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Hm...an interesting chapter. I wonder if Eric will pop up again and complicate things more? A surprising twist with Brielle inheriting $800,000. I'm sure that Renee's pregnancy isn't real, I keep waiting for it to be confirmed in a chapter. lol I hope that AJ and Brielle will be together eventually. lol Another great update, can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Keep on reading lol, there's a lot gonna happen dealing with Brie, Alex and Renee. I don't wanna give anything away though. And yeah, I thought her inheriting some money would be a little different. I do have plans for it though. Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews!
Date: 07/24/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Okay... she have money.. a lot.... Eric was a sweetheart to tell her the true... her parents are ******, but cmon Alex, open your eyes and you will see her love and fear!
I looooved the update, this story is amazing and I always wait to see a new chapter posted!!
NEXT!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. I feel so honored you're enjoying it so much. I hope you continue to do so. :) And check out the newest chp, you'll find something very familiar in it. ;) Thanks again!
Date: 07/23/10 06:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hey I do exist still just been really busy... I started this new story and I just keep typing like crazy. Its a very different to what I usually write. But anywho... I am still reading this and all I can do is Sigh... I think love is in the air.. lol. I loved this chapter and am so happy she was able to convince him to not go drink. Can't wait for an update. :)
Author's Response: There you are! LOL, it's no problem, I know how that is. Thank you for finally taking a read and reviewing though. :)
Date: 07/22/10 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Ok so who is this guy? We need to know a.s.a.p! So an update would be nice ;) I'm not good in reviewing so yeah..love this story!
Author's Response: Da da da dum! lol, I just updated for you. You'll find out who he is and what her parents are after. And your reviews are perfectly fine. :) I appreciate them! Thanks so much!
Date: 07/22/10 04:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
@ alota_cookin, I love you girl! "For the love of all things as sexy as AJ....UPDATE....NOW!" right from my mouth!
Author's Response: LOL, she cracks me up too!
Date: 07/21/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i love your story(ies) so much, and this was another amazing chapter!!!
but first... i can't believe it... alex wanted brielle take with him in a bar??? but why? so she couldn't tell denise where he is, or that he doesn't drink so much??? i'm glad, that brielle is one of the few people, to whom he listens...i think he doesn't like it, when bri is mad at him...
alex shoulnd't forget, how hard this situation is for her too...she left her friends and her familiar surrounding... she must deal with his alcohol problems, this bitch of (ex) fiancee... she has no one to speak to, if he get drunk so often... except denise... but i think,that wouldn't be the same... FACT... he needs her just as she needs him :D
kite flying ^^... i never did this, but it seems funny... and it's a good thing to calm down and it helped alex, to fight against the urge to drink ...maybe they should do such "crazy" things more often together... so they would know each other better...and get closer ;)... and alex would be distracted (hmm i wonder if this is the right word???)...
okay... and now who is this stranger???and what he wants??? and why the hell, you stop right now... i'm soooo curios!!!!
i'm ready for the next chapter... pls update... MEL=)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel honored that you love to read my writing. And Alex was just upset and craving a drink so badly that he didn't want anything getting in his way. He was afraid Brielle would tell his mom and then everything would be out there in the open. And you're right; he hates it when Brielle gets upset with him. You point out some very true things too about her situation and Alex forgetting about it. Let's hope he is more considerate and remembers how things are for her. And you've never flown a kite? Girl, you need to do that. It's very fun lol. But I've lost quite a few of them because the wind likes to take them away. So be careful and hold onto them tightly.
Date: 07/21/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I guess I COULD leave a nice long review and tell you how much I like the story...and how well the characters are developed...and how I love the relationship between Alex and Brielle...or how much Renee and her knack for making Alex wanna drink annoys me...or how I am absolutely SURE Renee is lying about being pregnant...........BUT........I've decided to just widdle this down to one point....... DAMN YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS! WHO IS THE GUY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! What does he want?!?!?!?!? For the love of all things as sexy as AJ....UPDATE....NOW!
Author's Response: LOL you are so funny. Thank you for another review. :D I am understanding everything you're pointing out and I'm sorry about the cliffhanger LOL. But the chapter would have been way too long and I had to end it somewhere. Besides, it makes you wanna come back for more. ;)
