Date: 07/21/10 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Yay, he resisted the urge to drink thanks to Bri!!! :) Very cute with the whole kite flying. But, he really needs to tell her about the rehab thing because it's only going to upset her later, like he didn't trust her enough to tell her. Also, who in the world is that guy?!?
Author's Response: Thank you :) And I'm on the same page with him telling Brie about his rehab. If he goes any longer he's going to make things worse.
Date: 07/21/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Another great chapter!! I can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad to see you on here! :)
Date: 07/20/10 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
great chapter. loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 07/20/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Man, you just keep me wanting more!! What a cliffhanger! This was a great chapter, Brielle certainly knows how to handle AJ. Their talk was really sweet and them holding each other was cute. I can't wait to find out who that visitor was that Brielle knew. Why didn't she want to see him? So many questions...can't WAIT for more! :D
Author's Response: I like to draw you in then keep you there lol. Thank you so much! And yes, she sure does know how to handle him and he's a little caught off guard because no one's been that way with him before. He secretly finds himself liking it. :) Hope you enjoy the update too! It answers all the questions you have.
Date: 07/20/10 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!
alex didnīt drink!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and itīs all up to brielle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
itīs kind of magic (love...) how he donīt want, that brie is mad at him...
brie always find the right words, gestures and tone in her voice to calm him down... itīs like you could almost feel, the good vibes between them!
her idea with the kites is really cute, like she is... and the conversation was naughty!!!!!!! :o)
both had their issues and itīs so good, that they could speak openly about it!!!
WHO is this man, they saw? i really want to know... damn cliffhanger!!! ;o)
ohhhh....and alex needs to get wasted, high or laid??? ^^ two of them arenīt a good option!!! but the third...hmm.... :o)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
i love it, to read and write in english, but iīm so insecure... so thank you for response to me!
Author's Response: Yay for Brielle and for Alex not drinking! And it's a lot of magic and love that he doesn't want her mad at him. He's finding himself falling hard and fast for her. LOL, glad you liked the kite convo; I thought I might trick some people with it hehe. And oh my at you thinking he should get laid. tee hee. As for your English; I've understood every review you've written and I enjoy them all! Thanks so much!
Date: 07/20/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You left me hanging! I wonder who the guy is. Ex boyfriend? Brother?
Author's Response: Sorry about that lol. I just updated. And you're spot on with one of your guesses. ;)
Date: 07/20/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh sweetie, thank you so much for the compliments!! I really appreciate! I just love to think, that's all!
God Bless! =)
Author's Response: You're so welcome. :) Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews.
Date: 07/20/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Okay.. YAY for he update, I miss this story.. now WOW! Brie's GOOD! Lovely moments at the beach!
WHO IS THAT MAN????????????? She have a dark past.....
Author's Response: Thank you! :) She doesn't know about his shrouded past with alcohol yet. She knows some of his past, but not the extent of what it was. As for her dark past ... read on and find out.
Date: 07/20/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
oh no............................... I wanna know!!!!!!!!! ugh i hate cliff hangers!!!!!!!!!
But Great chapter!!!!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I hate cliff hangers too, but sometimes they're fun to do.
Date: 07/19/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
WTF.....bringing her to a bar? wow....
Author's Response: LOL I know right! What is he thinking?
Date: 07/19/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Hmmm, interesting. 1. I am glad he finally got the courage to break up with Renee; 2. The fact that she said they were having a boy, and then had to back track saying it was instintic just proves she's not really pregnant! 3. I am interested in seeing where in the world Alex and Brielle are heading (literally and figuretively! ) Can't wait for an update! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I agree with you on him getting the courage to end things with Renee; let's just hope he's able to keep it. :)
Date: 07/18/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
great chapter!!!! and i can't believe... alex did it!!! i'm glad he realized what kind of person renee really is... and how she reacted shows, that his decision was right...
but" if "she is pregnant( i still can not believe her!!!), i'm sure she will do anything, that alex cannot see his son... btw...i don't think she can "feel" it's a son... motherly instinct ^^... it was her last try to make alex change his mind... but the worst was, how she talked of brielle:(
it's her fault, that alex will not marry her but she tries, to make someone else responsible... and then she threatens even with her father... ridiculous ^^
love it to see alex and bri together and how they talk together and this little gestures, they share with each other... i know it's a hard time for both of them and i don't think the rumors will stop soon... hope they can handle with the problems and i'm sure renee will cause much trouble...alex can really be proud of himself, i think it was the first time, he resisted the desire to drink...(is this correct?)
i'm curios to, where alex and brielle are going... so pls update soon... really love your story!!! MEL=)
Author's Response: Yes, our Alex is growing up lol and realizing what the real picture looks like. The wool is no longer over his eyes. Alex and Brielle are definitely growing closer and they really do seem comfortable and at peace together. And you got it! He did resist the urge to drink and he should be very proud. You'll find out where they're going all in the next chp. Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews! :)
Date: 07/18/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
HE TOLD RENE…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i canīt believe it!!! YEAH, alex... it was a hard decision for him, but he did it!!!!!
her reaction was sooo clearly for me!!! sheīs a bitch! everything in this world has a reason... a good or a bad...
itīs good that alex found out which kind of person his future wife is, and so he is spared from a divorce!!!!
iīm curious, where alex is going with brie! i hope he donīt drink, when sheīs near!!
i love their conversation...like always... the belong together... :o)
itīs so cool, that he joins her at the lamaze class, like really couples do, she needs and deserves it!!!
i love your story... pls update soon!!!!! greetings from austria!!!!!
iīm glad, you understand my reviews and like my idea for his christmas gift...
itīs not so easy, to write all my thoughts in a foreign language...i know the words and i know WHAT i want to write...but the grammar is killing me!!!!!!
Author's Response: Woot! Go Alex! He did such a good job! And yes, Renee is a major bitch lol and she's so pissed that he's breaking up with her. I like that I'm able to show how at ease and comfortable Alex and Brielle are together. Sometimes it's hard to know if what you write sounds good to the readers, so thank you for all your wonderful feedback. I bet it's hard to write in a foreign language, but I think it's great that you know more than one. I wish I was more fluent in another. No worries on what you write though, because I do understand it. Thanks again! :)
Date: 07/18/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Great chapter. But geez what's with giving Brie the attitude! She's just trying to help and make sure he's okay. He needs a serious attitude adjustment.
Hopefully Renee won't cause too much trouble but I doubt it. I really hope she's faking it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Your stuff is just amazing.
Author's Response: LOL, he really does. Let's hope she can put him into his place. He doesn't mean to give her attitude, but he's on edge and craving a drink and when he gets like that, he's snappy and man. Thanks so much on your review. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the fic. :)
Date: 07/17/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
OMG! *thud*
I was going insane without updates, but this made my heart almost blow with happiness!
Gezz, Renee will give a hard time. You know what, she said SON, isn't his baby... even Brie knows hers! Well... let's wait.
Now that talk without words between Alex and Brie... tense and I must say... sexy.. shhh! He loves her, and the best way to show this is that he doesn't drank and he is taking her with him.... she haven't fear to talk and she looks deep inside his soul, that makes the difference. She cares about him, she loves him.
Awww next, please!!!!
Author's Response: Aww I'm so sorry it took so long. Work has been kicking my butt lately. Hehe I'm glad my chp made you so happy. I love your enthusiasm and eagerness for the story. Feelings are definitely happening between Alex and Brielle, but you do a really good job of figuring things out. :) Thanks so much! Can't wait to read your next comment.
