Date: 07/17/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Ok seriously...I'm not sure if anyone else has mentioned it yet, but I've had this gut feeling since Renee announced she was pregnant....and now that it's a 'son' when it's way too early to tell, just confirms in my mind that Renee is SO FAKING THIS PREGNANCY! I got 20 bucks that says she made the whole story up, just because she was pissed about Brielle and thought that if she was pregnant, Alex would forget about Brielle and stay with her. So now you just need to keep on updating so I can confirm that I'm right, LOL. ;-)
Author's Response: Yay, you're reading this story! I'm so glad you are and I hope you like it. I've missed your wonderful reviews lol, they always made me smile. I wish I could comment on your thoughts with Renee and her pregnancy, but then I'd give too much away. I can continue to update though so you can find out. Thanks again! :)
Date: 07/17/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
This was another great chapter as always. I hope Renee gets the hint eventually. This may sound weird, but I kinda like this tension between AJ and Brielle. It's just different and it feels more real than them always being nice to each other if that makes any sense. I wonder where AJ and Brielle are going? Can't wait to find out, amazing job! :)
Author's Response: I don't think it sounds weird at all that you like the tension between them. I'm trying to keep it from being the usual boy meets girl kind of fic that's out there. I want to show how realistic things can be and I'm thrilled that you've noticed. Thank you for letting me know. And thank you so much for all your faithful reviews! :)
Date: 07/17/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Where are you taking her Aj?! With the way he's acting, its making me think about all those stories in the news where the bf or husband kills his pregnant gf or wife. Lol! I watch way too much of "first 48". Hurry and update I wana know where he's taking her!
Author's Response: LOL! I hadn't thought of it in that way, but you're totally right. I just udpated, so please check it out and find out where they are going. Thanks so much! :)
Date: 07/17/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
So glad to see Alex grew a pair, but he still needs to get his shit together.
Love this chapter and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes, he really does. But ending things with Renee was a big step. Let's hope he can continue to get his act together. Thanks so much!
Date: 07/15/10 05:59 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
I MISS THIS!!!!! Are you alright, hun??
Hope to see the next update soon in my phone. God Bless!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for your concern, but I'm doing alright. I just got swamped with work. Thanks so much for checking in on me though. And I just updated. :) You should check out my other fic as well, Once In A Blue Moon. You might enjoy it.
Date: 07/09/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
itīs kind of funny, how alex donīt want brielle to be angry at him... he really likes her...and maybe more!!
reneé is so annoying!! her bitchy attitude!!!! i hope sheīs lies about the whole baby thing!! iīm sure she is will have alex under pressure with the baby... when he doesnīt do what she wants, he will not see the baby often... :o(
iīm glad, that brielleīs parents left and i hope the fly home!!! they arenīt good for her!!
awww...denise is such a sweetheart!!! she cares a lot about brielle and i loved it how she comfort her!!!
and awww... they made up!! and when she asks him to stay... awww.... sooo sweet!!!!
i was really stunned... that he promised her, not to drink so much.... thatīs more than he would say to anyone else!
i hope they two sweeties can admit that they fall for each other!!! thatīs so cool...
it seems like, i should work, on my curses ;o) LOL yeah heīs an ass... like his daughter :o)
and for the gift for alex...hmm.. maybe she could make some photos... from denise and him...and people he likes and him... or the landscape around them...and make a book... or so...
sooo...pls update!!!! love it!!!
Author's Response: Aww, yeah he's finding himself slowly falling into something with her. And if Renee is pregnant, then yes, he'll have a fight with her over seeing the baby, that's for sure. As for his promise to Brielle, I don't know if that's something he'll be able to control ...but we'll have to see. LOL, you're doing just fine with your explanations, I haven't had any problems understanding you. Your gift idea is a great one and it gave me an idea. So thank you. :) Glad you're still enjoying this!
Date: 07/09/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
first... renee is such a bitch and i think, she always was one... but alex was so in love, that he didn't see it... but now, it seems, he realizes, that she is not the woman, he should marry :D and he definetly feels more for brielle, and she is not only the woman, who is having his baby... he has to be honest to himself ^^
alex needs somebody like her at his side... brielle is so good for him and he is so relaxed and happy, when he is with her... renee however means stress... and stress means, alex drinks again... and that's BAD... really BAD... too many people will be hurt...
so let's do something alex... at first, tell renee, you don't want to marry her and then make love to brielle... or the other way ;)
i wonder, what brielles parents are expected... did they really thought, her daughter would be glad to see them and forgives them just like that??? i'm sure they want something, but WHAT???? really money??? i think we'll find out soon...
i'm glad, that denise likes brie and takes care for her too... she never did it for renee, right?? it was great, the way she talked to alex... brielle needs him, now more than ever... lilly is back home and she has nobody, exept him...
at least, i hope he keeps his promise, not to drink so much... i really hope, he will do it... for brielle and their baby :D
i really hope you know what i mean... it's so hard for me, to write my thoughts in english... and i always hope, it doesn't sound too weird...;)
love your story(ies) sooo much, summer.... and as always... i can't wait for more MEL=)
Author's Response: I think you're very right in Alex being blind to her true self. But it's starting to come out now and he's realizing. Yes, Brielle relaxes Alex instead of Renee who drives him to drink lol. You do a really good job with interpreting the characters and what not. You'll definitely find out what's going on with her parents, because they aren't done yet lol. You'll have to keep on reading and find out if he keeps his promise or not. Hehe. And thanks so much for the reviews. I'm glad you enjoy the story and I look forward to reading your thoughts. :)
Date: 07/09/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Yay they finally made up!!! And Alex finally admitted that he's not in love with Renee!!! Good chapter! I still wanna know what her parents are up to though... Can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Aww hehe, yay! Thanks so much! I'm definitely bringing her parents back, so keep reading.
Date: 07/09/10 06:24 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
awwwwwwwww
Author's Response: :) Thank you
Date: 07/09/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Sweetie, I am so glad that you've liked my reviews and that I could reach something! THANK YOU! It's so easy to think with this story.. I am REALLY into this! The Diary was the first thing I could mind. THANK YOU! God Bless, Gabs. xxoo
Author's Response: Aww well you are so welcome and thank you. I definitely like the diary idea and I think I might be implementing it further down the road; so stay tuned. :)
Date: 07/09/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
OMG! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! Lord... he FACED UP! He FINALLY faced up! Jesus.. the poor man is slow....hey.. Brie is a woman, guys.. one day she would do that to Renee.. that bitch! God Alex, if you don't kick her. I DO that for you! GO BRIE!!! He loves her.. she loves him.. awww.. so much DRAMA! I stay with the Diary, and after ALL that happened...he MUST write a new future... with some blonde.. he he.. AMAZING!
Author's Response: Aww hehe. LOL yes, he is definitely slow. Lovin' the writing a new future idea. :) You're such a sweetheart and I love reading your reviews. Thank you!
Date: 07/09/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/09/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
such a sweet chapter, i'm glad to see Alex working on his shit. I'm pulling for Bri. I hope things really work out for her.
Author's Response: Aww thank you. :) Alex is trying, but there's definite hang ups.
Date: 07/09/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Another amazing chapter. I'm not quite sure what to think about Brielle's parents yet, this is more complicated than I thought. Renee needs to go away and admit that she's not really pregnant. lol AJ needs to confront his problems with Renee, but this will not end well. AJ also shouldn't have promised Brielle that he'd cut back on his drinking, 'cause God knows it's probably going to get worse before it gets better.
I can't wait for another update, great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Brielle's parents are definitely still in the picture and they'll be back. Their reasons for wanting back into their daughters lives will be revealed ...and I'm gonna say, it's a shocker. You're right about AJ not promising, because that's definitely going to be a problem. Read the next chp and you'll see why lol. Thanks again! I really appreciate you pimping my story out for me lol. :)
Date: 07/08/10 11:41 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
i love how the two cuties act together,... itīs so wonderful to "see", how much brielle gives alex... hmmm... how could i explain? she seems so innocent and "normal" (in a GOOD way), and sheīs so naiv and sweet... she shows him simple joys of the normal life... she has no bitchy attitudes... sheīs not trying to be someone else... you see... i really like her... :o))
wow...reneéīs father is really a dork!!! (is this correct?? IDK) how dare he, threaten alex in his OWN house!!!! we arenīt living in the Middle-Ages!!! itīs already 2010... a not married woman with a baby isnīt something unusual... (Especially in europe ;o) ) who does he think he is? a damn mafia guy?
such a pity itīs ending, like so often... alex is drinking... and the worst is, that denise knows it, but is afraid to talk to her son, because, she knows how he would react...
alex is aware, that he shouldnīt... but like the thing with reneé... he couldnīt admit!!!!
brielle is damn right!!!! denise is such a nice and caring person, and she donīt deserve, that they lie!!!!!
LOOOOVE your story...more please!!! greetings...
Author's Response: Aww thank you, I'm glad you love it. And yes, she does seem very "normal". I think you really described how she is spot on. And I'm glad that you like her so much! :) And yes, Renee's father is horrible, though I wouldn't say dork ...a dork is kind of similar to nerd. He's just an ass and a jerk (maybe you meant that). He sure stepped over the line, but Alex held his own which is really good. LOL, love the mafia comment! He seems to think he is because he acts like he owns everyone. As for Alex's drinking, such a sad, sad thing but let's hope his mom and Brielle can help him out. Because he needs to get some serious help before it gets worse. And thank you so much for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, I really appreciate it! :)
