Date: 07/05/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Another great chapter as always. Again, I still say that Renee's pregnancy is fake. lol I have a feeling that Brielle's parents want something, I don't know what though. I agree with Denise, her instincts are correct about AJ and Brielle and his drinking. Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Denise knows her son and the signs he gives when he's drinking; so let's hope he's able to get some help. And Brielle's parents definitely have an agenda which will be revealed in due time. Got lots in store for everyone so stay tuned. :)
Date: 07/05/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
thank you soo much for this amazing chapter... i can't get enough of your story!!!
i now, i said this already.... but i do it again anyway... i LOVE this alex in your story... he always knows, what to say or to do, so brielle feels comfortable and protected!!! and how he said to her parents, that they should leave... great... and i still wonder, what they want... money??? or do they really feel sorry,for what happened, and want their daughter back??? my feeling tells me, that the two, will make even worse :(
ahhh... it seemed the world stood still as they kissed again... they can't get enough of it... or???? and i love to read about it ^^...
it was sweet to read, what alex thinks about brielle... that it is she, who gives HIM strength, and makes, that he doesn't feel weak... normally, it should be his fiancee,which makes him feel so, but i'm glad that it is brielle... and she is now much more involved in his life, as renee...
denise knows, that alex drinks again... their relation is so intense and so it was only a matter of time,until she knows it... AND she feels it too... that something is happening between brielle and her son...:D
hope alex will also realize soon, that renee isn't the right woman for him... and PLEASE let this pregnancy be a fake!!!!!
pls update soon... i still want more... and of course i'll continue reading... MEL=)
Author's Response: Aww well you're so welcome. I'm thrilled that you're still enjoying it! And I'm glad you like this Alex ... it just come easy to him when it comes to Brielle. I'll tell you this much about her parents; they definitely want something. I got it all figured out, so stay tuned and I promise you'll find out. And I'm glad I'm able to write the kisses in a nice way that you like ...sometimes it's hard to gauge how well you're doing when you write it. And yes, Denise is definitely suspecting that her son is taking to the bottle again so we'll have to see how she handles it. I'm trying to get the chps updated as soon as I can and your reviews really help. Thanks so much and can't wait to read more from you! :)
Date: 07/04/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
awww... this sweet behave between alex and brie! itīs so cool!! both canīt deny, they care so much for each other!
and how near they came... god... that was so HOT
iīm sure she really forget everything... even that lily leave ;)
lily is soooo right!!! thereīs more between them... and again is brielle so mature for her age. she wonīt cause more troubles for alex. she really like him and isnīt as selfish as reneé.
the one thing reneé is thinking abiout is herself. sie couldnīt care less, about alex and his feelings!!
wow...her parents found her... i thought they arenīt interested in her? they seemed so cold... but now they are here, but why? hmmm... i donīt trust them...
i need more.... please update soon!!!!!!
and the é (in reneé)... i push "shift" and then the accent button, before i push the E button...
LOL... well itīs hard to explain, when the language isnīt your mother tongue ;) :)
i follow you on twitter now! :) greetings...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, there's definitely something happening between the two hehe. Lily is a smart person lol and Brie knows something is going on, but she doesn't wanna cause any trouble. And you're totally right; Renee is only thinking of herself; she doesn't seem to care how AJ feels. And yes, her parents weren't interested in her life for the last three years and now they showed up so we'll have to see what happens. Let's hope Alex helps Brie cuz it might be some drama there. And I'm still trying to get that accent lol I couldn't seem to get those keys to work right; but I'm determined and I"ll get it......I hope. LOL thanks again!
Date: 07/03/10 08:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
this chapter was soooo amazing... I LOVE IT!!!!!
alex is really wonderful and how he treated brielle is great... and yeah, lily is right, the feelings they have for each other, are not to be overlooked... he always shows, how much he cares about her...and how sorry he was, because renee was here when lily and she came back yesterday... he know how his fiancee is.. she constantly tries to hurt brielle, and makes everything, that she feels uncomfortable...
and this kiss... it was so intense again... the two can't deny the attraction, that exists between them... and god, can't believe it... now they were interrupted again HAHA
i can't remind that brielle talked about her parents , but i mean to remember, that they were not there for their daughter in the past, or am i wrong??? and how do they know, where she is AND what they want...
it was really sad, when lily left, but i'm glad, that alex knows, how lonely brielle would be, if he wouldn't change and stop drinking....hope he will do it...
and leigh is great to... i'm glad, that there is someone, to talk to brielle, except alex and his mum... i had a big smile on my face, as brielle said, "besides, you're a boy" :D
l really love how you describethe feelings and the persons in it and i like brielle so much!!! and the kisses... wow... i would like to know, to whom do you think, when you describe this... ;)
i'm curios to know, how things will go on... and i feel so sorry for alex LOL... it seems, everything gets more and more complicated and the "surprises" never end...
i'm glad you like my reviews... i love your responses too... :D
can't wait for more!!!!! MEL=)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm glad you liked how I wrote out the kiss; sometimes after doing those scenes I'm not really sure how they come across, so I really appreciate that you're letting me know how it sounded. :) When I write the kiss or romantic scenes, I don't picture a specific person, I just try to imagine how the characters would be feeling then write it out. It can take quite awhile sometimes lol. And I'm thrilled that you like Brielle, I always hope she comes across okay. Denise thought that Brie needed another woman she could hang with so she called Leigh and I think it was a good idea. Now that Lily is leaving, she'll have someone else she can call if she wants to have some girl time. LOL I thought that 'besides, you're a boy' was a cute line too. As for how things will go....you'll have to continue to read, hehe cuz there's lots ahead. :) Thanks again and hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Date: 07/03/10 05:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
part of my love it is here: my name is GaBRIELE! heh
Author's Response: LOL that's too funny. Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 07/03/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh man, Brielle and Alex are going deeper in their "relationship". Wow! I totally didn't expect her parents to show up. Can't wait to see how this all plays out! As always, thanks for the update! :D
Author's Response: You're so welcome for the update and thank you for the review! :) Glad you're enjoying it still and I was hoping the arrival of her parents would catch people by surprise. I'm happy it did. Thanks again!
Date: 07/03/10 04:10 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh so now that's she pregnant with a famous man's baby they all of the sudden want to show up and see her?! Hell no! You didn't give a shit bout her then so leave her alone now! They betta not want money!
Author's Response: That's right girl...hell no! Brielle definitely thinks they want something or they wouldn't have shown up .... hope you'll continue to read and see what that is. And thanks so much for taking a minute and leaving a review!
Date: 07/03/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
great few chapters. alex and bielle need to be together!!! love it as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! They're too cute together to not be a couple, right?
Date: 07/03/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
great few chapters. alex and bielle need to be together!!! love it as always.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/03/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
OMG!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Brie and alex... GO GO!!!!
Parents.. they aren't parents.. just saying..
PLEASE, NEXT!!! I'm in looove here!!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks you much! Glad you're loving it so much and I can't wait to see what you think about the next chapters. :)
Date: 07/02/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Awww Nick saves the day! Great chapter, i see that he had some hard choices to make soon, Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Aww yeah, he really helped his brother out there. Thanks so much!
Date: 07/02/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Holy crap!!! What a twist! I wonder if she really is preggo...and if so, I wonder if it's his. And poor AJ spiraling downward. I couldn't help but laugh a little about shoving her out the window. Lol. Thank God she was ok.
Author's Response: A lot of people have been saying she's faking it ...or it's not AJ's ... so we shall see. LOL and I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought it was kind of funny when he shoved her out the window. Not too many people commented on that, so thank you. Glad you're enjoying the fic so far. :)
Date: 07/02/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
damn... I HATE reneé!! i hate her, because, she makes this anyway very difficult situation much worse!!!! sheīs so selfish and mean!!! did she ever think about her "fiancé" and his feelings? did she really thinks itīs that easy for him? he wouldnīt want to have a child without being there for. he wants to do the right, and she should know and apreciate it. reneé knows everything ( i think so) about his past and his dad ;o) she should have known, heīs such a kind man
i know sheīs hurt, but he didnīt want to. they had an open relationship (how could she ever agree with that???) and she also do what she wanted to!
and how she said that she will bring no bastard on the world ... there I had goosebumps! it is her baby ... and not a bastard ... watch your language missy!!! ;(
poor denise... I hope this revelation does not leave permanent damage!!! ;o)
denise isnīt stupid, she will find out, that heīs been drinking again... and now she had a suspicion...
awwww....alex!!! DONīT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please.... itīs not good for you... anyway!!!
iīm glad, that nick is there for him!!! *.*
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! greetings
Author's Response: How do you get that accent above the E in Renee? I'd love to know. And yes, she is messing everything up lol. Let's hope AJ realizes and gets out of it before it's too late. Eeep. And Denise is definitely catching on to something going on with AJ ... let's hope she's able to help him before it gets worse. Thank you so much for the review! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 07/02/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter Seven
Holy crap!!!! How awkward. That is soooo dirty.
Author's Response: I know right! She's a sneaky bitch. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/02/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter Four
Wow. Kudos to AJ for stepping up. At the same time, the mentions of him wanting a drink make me think that he is definitely gonna have a hard time with this, which is to be expected!
Author's Response: Oh yes, he's going to struggle which I think might be something he really would have problems with. And there's no way he could have gone about his business knowing he had a kid out there somewhere. Poor guy. Glad you're liking it so far and hope you'll continue to follow along. Thank you!
