Date: 06/21/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great update! I hope Frie's okay!!! I am real real real sick of Renee though, she has to go!!! Haha, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I think everyone's getting sick of Renee; but I got plans lol. Just sit tight and hang with me. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/21/10 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I wonder how the paps found them at the hospital? Hmm...
After reading that chapter, I would've thought you'd been through it yourself, so well done on getting it accurate! As for what they should have, I think a girl would be nice :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much; I really did my research to make it as realistic as possible. And thanks for your vote on a girl ... most people seem to think he'd be cuter with a girl. :)
Date: 06/21/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Awww that was so sweet!!! I can totally understand Denise's reaction though, and I'm sure Brie will understand too :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far! I think Brie will understanding her reaction as well. :)
Date: 06/21/10 10:46 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
i can't believe it... they kissed!!!! and wow... this was so intense.... i think they had not stopped to kiss, if they had not been interrupt... but has somebody seen them???
LOL how embarassed they were then... :D and yeah... i'm sure they like each other more than they admit... but the circumstances are really bad to allow such feelings...
and allthough the situation is more complicated now than ever, alex risks a fight with renee, before letting go brielle ^^...
and YES i think renee is lying and she is not pregnant... means... i hope so...
she is really a bitch... sorry ;)... and i'm sure it will be a pleasure for denise to go shopping with her daughter in law LOL...
but now... what's the matter with brielle and her baby???? i need to know... so pls update as soon as possible... MEL=)
ps: i think alex is good in bed ( i'm sure you too) LOL... what a pity, that we will never have the pleasure to test it ;)
Author's Response: Hehe they sure did; couldn't deny it any longer. Who knows what might have happened had they not been interrupted.... And yes, there are some feelings there but just too much drama at the moment for either one to really think anything more ya know. So many people think Renee's pregnancy is fake lol ...it sure sounds like something she'd do though. And I just updated so I hope you'll read it and let me know your thoughts. Thanks so much for the review! And yes, we'll never get to put that theory to the test...such a shame lol. :)
Date: 06/21/10 05:48 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I love it, love it, love it. I really do not like Renee and i hope alex gets rid of her and stays with Brielle. I wonder if Renee is faking her pregnancy just to keep him and get rid of brielle?
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to give some feedback. Can't say what's in store for Renee, but I hope you'll stick with me and find out. :)
Date: 06/21/10 04:37 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow, this is just getting more and more complicated...I hope Brielle will be okay. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Drama, drama, drama lol. Thanks so much for being such a faithful reviewer!
Date: 06/21/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I bet Rene isn't even pregnant....seriously I just get the feeling or that HER kid isn't AJ's.
Author's Response: Ooh, you never know. Interesting though on that if she is it might not be AJ's; I think you're the first to suggest that.
Date: 06/21/10 02:47 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh NO! Renee is being a bitch he just needs to get rid of her for good!
Great chapter can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! LOL what fun would it be if there wasn't at least one bitch involved?
Date: 06/21/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Seriously Alex... if THIS haven't made up your mind.. WHAT WILL??
Man, stop and stare your life....
Brie isn't alright, isn't she???
Good Lord that kiss..... NEXT!
Author's Response: LOL I know right! What is it going to take for him to figure out how evil and horrible Renee is for him! Hehe, glad you enjoyed the kiss!
Date: 06/20/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter One
god....such an amazing chapter!!!!!
i“m glad that he apologize!! he owe it brielle!!!
and wow...he sang for her... how wonderful... I could imagine this scene as well... and THIS kiss... WOW... they are falling for each other.. but the circumstances are so bad for the both... and thats so sad...
how sweet and embarrassed they were after this kiss...
i loved it, when he says, that he wanted to kiss her when he saw her in new york!!!! they“re craving for each other... and sooner or later, no one could get between them, they should be together!! it“s fate... (i hope so) not even fucking bitch reneč could seperate them!!!
she“s such an incorrect queue... poor denise will get the shock of her life when they told her about the pregnancy!!! and shopping with reneč isn“t the top thing on her list... I am sure, at this point!!!!
and about the qualities of "the nice looking guy"... in my opinion, i think, she“s got no reasons to complain... :o)
but what about brielle and their baby??? i hope everything would be fine again and she could keep the baby!!!!
hurry alex, she needs you!!!!
god...i hate the point, where you stop the story!!! i need to get sure, that she“s ok!!!!!
god can“t wait to read what comes next!!!!! please update soon!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
(btw...nice song...)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback; it really gives me the motivation I need to keep the chapters coming. And I'm glad the kiss went over well; I was hoping that it sounded okay as I was writing out. They say you're your own worst critic and that is very true. LOL Yeah, they weren't sure how to act after the kiss and it's gonna be interesting to see where it goes with them both now. Glad you liked the song. Did you check it out on Youtube? Can't wait to see what you think about the next chps!
Date: 06/20/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I freaking hate Renee! I bet she's just faking just to keep Aj's attention. Hope Brielle and baby are ok.
Author's Response: Ooh, you never know. Sounds like something she'd do. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 06/20/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter One
loved the lastest chapter! Glad she's staying in CA. Can't wait to read more. The baby better be okay!! Loved it all.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, she probably would be best to stay in CA even with Renee there. :)
Date: 06/18/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Great update but I don't think renee ia really pregnant she's an evil biotch so she's probably lying, lets hope the truth comes out soon enough. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, faking a pregnancy is something I wouldn't put past her...but we shall see hehe. :)
Date: 06/17/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
i so love the twist! i can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hehe thank you!
Date: 06/17/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
first... i don't believe that renee is pregnant!!! she has become aware, that she has acted wrong... and because she don't want to loose alex, she told him she is pregnant too!!! he should go to the doctor with her to be sure, that she doesn't lie...
and alex tried to forget and gets drunk :( and WHAT???... she has to go out of the window with his bottles of alcohol, because his mother shouldn't know, he drinks again... i can't believe it!!! alex is so different when he is drunk and nothing looks more like the thoughful man he was before... i hope he apologizes at brielle... :(
i really hope brielle changes her opinion and doesn't leave L.A.... lily is right, she should first talk to alex before taking a decision!!!
and finally i want to know too... is the "nice looking guy" good in bed??? LOL... lily is great... love her :D
thanks for this awesome update!!! i LOVE your story sooooooooo much... greetings MEL=)
Author's Response: Ooh you think she's lying? You do have some very nice points there, I will keep them in mind...and we'll see if she's lying or not. LOL, yeah Alex had a bit of a panic there when he forced her out the window...not very nice of him to do at all. LOL as for him being good in bed hehe...what do you think? Thanks so very much for your wonderful reviews, I enjoying reading them. :)
