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Reviewer: XredXXtearsX87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter Nine

awww they're getting closer!!!!!!!! Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hehe they really are. Thank you!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine

btw, they are starting to feel something to each other.. isn't? All those almost hugs, grins, pain... it's deep and they even now...

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you're picking up on that. Things are progressing along ...going to be interesting. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Nine

thanks for this amazing chapter!!!!

renee doesn't want to talk with alex... what a pity ^^
i think that's the best thing that could happen to them... without her, is all much more relaxed for brielle... (did i tell you, i don't like her LOL)

i loved alex as he told her, that he comes with her when she goes to the doctor!!! "IT'S MY BABY TOO"... that was so cute ^^ and shows brielle, that alex really wants to take care for her and the baby :D

i'm sure he will be a good daddy and certainly NOT only for the first eighteen years... lily was right... she is here in his house and he bought this things, she needs... and he wants her to stay here... (i hope she will ) just to list a few reasons...

i laughed so much,when lily thought alex' mum is the housekeeper LOL but she was not angry , wasn't she??? i'm really curios how their conversation will go... i think, denise will like brielle... in any case, more than renee ;)

it's good for brielle, that she knows that denise wants her to do this test, and WHY she wants this... not to blame her, but to protect her son... perhaps it's really the best, if she makes this test...

LOVE your story.... and i hope you will update soon!!! =) MEL

Author's Response:

You're so welcome and thank you for the awesome review! LOL, I think a lot of people feel that Renee's absence is a good thing. And yes, Alex definitely wants to be involved in the pregnancy. He doesn't want to be the way his father was when he was a child.

 LOL I'm glad you liked Lily mistaking Denise for the housekeeper. It made me laugh when I was writing it out. Denise and Brielle may have some issues along the way, but I don't think anything's going to be too horrible between them. But no promises so keep on reading and find out what happens. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Aw my heart's shattered now!! I know they will end up together, but... lot pain's yet to come... Don't leave us!!

Author's Response: Aww lol I don't want to shatter your heart. I hope you'll enjoy the journey even if there is pain along the way. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Excellent chapter. Love it all.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I love this story! I wasn't expecting to see Denise so soon. I wonder how their "chat" will go? Can't wait to read more, thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Just updated a chp with Denise and Brielle's conversation hehe, hope you'll enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: WishingOnAStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Good chapter! Let's hope Denise plays nice! :) I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! Read on to see what transpires between Denise and Brielle. I hope you'll enjoy it!

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Nine

So freaking cute and wtf he needs to just hug her already!

Author's Response: LOL Aww I know right. Hopefully that comes soon! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Eight

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Just did!!!! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

yay new chapter. Renee should stay away ha!

Author's Response: Hehe, yup and just updated another one too! And where would all the fun be if Renee didn't come back 'round? Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter Eight

OH MY GOSH! Seriously, every update of every story tonight will be like this? Please, call 911 here! *dizzy*
Hun, I need to say: Okay... Renee isn't at the happiest moment of her life, and Alex fucked up.. done, I said the F word. BUT DO THIS?? You are evil Renee! Poor Brie and Alex.... Gezz! He is a gentleman!
Leighanne got everything, isn't?
Please, more updates, hun!

Author's Response: Aww lol I'm sorry, didn't mean to make you dizzy. I'm glad though that I could evoke those emotions. Must be doing something right. And yes, Renee is feeling very evil ...we'll see what comes of that. As for Leighanne; she sure hit the nail squarely on the head there. Thanks so much for the feedback! Hope you'll continue to read and enjoy!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter Eight

Amazing chpter as always. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter! Renee is a bitch! I would be mad too if my fiancee was having a baby with someone else but I wouldn't have done what she did. Please please please update soon!

Author's Response: I know right! I would be very pissed, but I wouldn't have done that either. But like you said, Renee is a bitch lol. Thank you for the review! And I am trying hard to update as often as I can for you. :)

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Eight

another amazing chapter... THANKS!!!

first i have to say, that i'm so glad that lily came with brielle to L.A., it was really great how she defended her friend :D...

i hated renee in this moment... why hasn't she told alex that she is not okay with this situation???
no she invited his friends and humiliates brielle in front of them!!!!

and alex is really great!!! how he comforts her... and he always finds the right words to make brielle feeling better...

i love it that he was following her and not his fiancee LOL

but he has to speak with renee and make things clear... because it is HIS house and HIS friends ;) ... ohhh i think he reined her in her barriers ( is this correct?) ... and he had so right to do it ^^

i think leighanne guessed what their "secret" is and i'm very curios how the guys will react, when they hear about!!!

they will certainly be surprised but will they really think bad about her... i don't think so but who knows????

i LOVE your story more and more and can't wait for a new update... soooo PLEASE don't let us wait too long =) MEL

Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much! And yes, Brielle is definitely glad Lily is there as well. She is sort of her protector I guess you could say. And Renee is a horrible person, but she's good drama lol. As for Alex, he is wonderful with trying to comfort and help Brielle. LOL glad you caught that with him going after Brielle and not Renee. You're so right though about him putting his foot down and telling Renee how it is. And yes, he did definitely reign her in with what he told her when he yelled at her in front of everyone. And yes, his friends and the guys are definitely going to be surprised when they find out the news ...that is if Leighanne doesn't say anything first, because she's on to something there. LOL, you're reviews are so great and thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! :)

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Eight

OMG this is getting so cute. Update again!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!