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Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

iīm glad that alex and denise are talk things out!! he needs her now more than ever!!!
he canīt handle with this situation alone. he needs support and denise wouldnīt disappoint him, i knew.
alex...*sigh* drink and drive is such a bad...really really bad decision!!! i thought youīve learn from your mistakes in the past!!! you KNOW that you can be stronger than this, and alcohol wouldnīt chaange anything!!!!
i understand why renee is pissed of... itīs hard for her, to know that the girl, who slept with her "man" is having his baby and will stay in LA for a while! iīm sure sheīs affraid of losing him and his unfaithful hurts her.
but i care more about brielle...sorry but she needs some support (even itīs only mines, besides her friend...lol) and i liked her more....lol

i hope alex donīt get in an accident!!!
canīt wait to read the next chapter!!! i hope you understand my review!!! greetings =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your awesome feedback! I love long reviews hehe. Yeah, there are a lot of hurt and upset feelings going around, but hopefully everyone can pull together and work through it all. Alex is definitely going to have his issues he is going to need to work though and Renee has her reservations about the whole situation. I'm so glad you care for Brielle and yes, she definitely needs the support...all she can get. :) I'm glad you like her ... I like her more too lol. Thanks again for the review!!

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Six

hmm... alex may need help now if he is continuing to go after Jack D. even though I understand since his world has been turned upside down. I have a feeling that Renee is not going to agree at all and dump him... just my opinion. loving this!

Author's Response: He's definitely going to need some help, that's for sure. Turning to the bottle when you have a problem is not good. And Renee definitely has her own reasons for the decisions she makes so stay tuned because there's lots more to come. Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 10:26 am Title: Chapter Six

Well she was bound to be pissed off with him, but if he gives her time then maybe she'll cool off.  Drinking and driving is a bad idea, especially after downing a whole bottle of JD!  I hope he doesn't have an accident.

Author's Response: She sure was...she just needs some time to calm down and relax. And Alex needs to stop drinking and get some help...he's got a lot ahead of him. Let's hope it doesn't go the wrong way. Thanks for taking the time to give some feedback! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 10:16 am Title: Chapter Six

i'm glad that alex and denise talked and everything is all right again now...i understand that she wants that alex makes this test... but for now she should trust him and let brielle come over, before they take any decisions =)

i know i should feel sorry for renee it's really an awkward situation for her too...however, i have such a great support for brielle, so that I don't care actually how Renee is... (I'm a bad girl, I know... lol)

and alex is drinking again :( i think he also needs somebody who cares about him... this isn't the right way to handle with this situation, but i'm sure he knows this best...

so well, let's see what happens when brielle comes to L.A.

thanks for this great chapter =)
many greetings MEL

Author's Response: Yes, Alex and his Momma had to talk and make up. He needs someone in his court and she's his mom. And you're not the only one who feels for Renee, even I do and she's not the nicest of people. But I'm glad that you're supporting Brielle...she definitely needs it. LOL, you're not a bad girl. And as for Alex, he just needs to find someone who really is there for him and not what he is or can offer. There is a lot ahead for them all when she gets to LA. Stay tuned and thanks so much for the wonderful feedback! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: WishingOnAStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter Six

First of all, I was way behind! You're updating like crazy! Haha I love it!!! I am finally caught up and wow! Great great great chapters. I really don't like the drinking at all... blah! I am glad he's doing the right thing and the Brie decided to go out for a visit. It should be interesting! I can't wait for the next update!!!

Author's Response: LOL, yeah I had a rush of chps I wanted to get out. I'm slowing down some cuz I have a lot going on, but I'm definitely gonna try to get them updated as much as I can. I don't like that he's drinking either, but I think it's something he'd do. Stay tuned and definitely let me know what you think about Brielle's visit to LA. Thanks so much for taking a moment to review!

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 05:14 am Title: Chapter Six

Ok seriously the AJ in this story is making me wanna beat the real AJ for all that damn drinking!

Author's Response: LOL aww well go right ahead. Hunt him down and let him know exactly how you feel. Or give Brian a note. hehe.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 03:31 am Title: Chapter Six

Good Lord NOOO!!! I think Bri will be the one to help Alex... not him helping her.

Author's Response: Ooh you may be onto something hehe. I'm not gonna say anymore, but you are the first person to bring that up. Hehe good job!

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter Six

Bad bad bad boy Alex!

Author's Response: Shame on him! LOL Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 02:16 am Title: Chapter Six

Wow, thanks for updating again. :)

Author's Response: You're so welcome :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/10 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Five

Great chapter.  I don't envy the talk he's going to have to have with Renee though, that's going to a hard.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you. :) And I wouldn't want to be there for that lol. That's some tough stuff.

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/10 03:05 am Title: Chapter Five

I don't like the girlfriend for many reasons so you can get rid of her outta the story anyway you please.

He is being so understanding through all this I love it and he needs to be with her!! And he needs to stop drinking.....

Author's Response: LOL, then where would the drama be? He's definitely trying to be understanding, but he's struggling. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Five

alex, alex.... i don't think drinking will help you to solve your problems ;)
ohhhh... i really have sympathie for him, he seems completely overtaxed with the situation... but the worst still comes... his conversation with renee :(

i hope that she doesn't freak out too much... but i think she will...

that lily will come with brielle is great... she needs somebody around herself for the first time and well, i hope she likes L.A. and will stay there :D

i really love your story... love how you describe the feelings of everyone and then this relation of alex and his mother...i think it could be also that way in the actual life :)

for me as alex fan it's amazing to read such a great story... can't wait for a new update... MEL

PS: sorry for shocking you last time ;)

Author's Response:

Ooh no way, drinking will only make it worse. But he doesn't realize that of course. And yes, he's very overtaxed and stressing out. Let's hope he can figure out a way to handle it without getting himself smashed each time.

I thought Lily going along would make it easier for everyone and take some pressure off. I wouldn't want to go there all by myself, so I don't blame Brielle for wanting Lily to tag along. And I totally think Denise and Alex could have a relationship like I'm portraying it ...it sure seems like it could be.

Thank you so much for your review. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it so much and I can't wait for you to read on and see all I have in store. You make me blush with how you think this story is so good and I really appreciate that. And it's no problem that you shocked me lol. Take care and hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Five

Great update! Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you and htanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 09:51 am Title: Chapter Five

Oh NO....he drank...drowning his problems wouldnīt work...he already knows! =(
i think itīs a good idea, that lily goes with her to california! she needs so one who loves her in the near, when she first met denise and alexī fiancée... that will be an awkward situation, i bet!
canīt wait to read more!!!! iīm dying to know, how it would be in california....
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! LOVE IT!!!! =)

Author's Response: Aww I know right! He needs some help! And yeah, I think Lily going going with her is good for everyone. Totally awkward for her when she meets the fiancee and his mother. I'm so glad you love it and I'm trying to get it updated as fast as I can! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 08:12 am Title: Chapter Five

boy do i sense drama coming...lol... I am loving this story can't wait to see what the fiancee will say.. eek.

Author's Response: LOL your senses are so spot on. There's lotsa drama coming. Glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for the review! :)