Date: 10/04/10 03:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Are you serious!!! WHY WHY WHY! Everything started out so great at the beginning of the chapter. and then this! Gah!
Ok frak out... beautifully written as always. Loved it and can't wait for more.
Please make it all better soon. I'm beggin here!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm definitely trying to work on it as much as I can. And sorry about bursting your happy bubble lol.
Date: 10/03/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Alex don't move that bitch in your house! Its a trap and you're falling for it! She had her chance with you and she messed it up with being a crazy bitch! If I was Brie I probally wouldn't have left Renee alone wih Alex. No telling what she would try. I don't trust her at all!
Please don't make me wait too long before you update again. I amost forgot about this story and how much I like it.
Author's Response: Eeek lol. I agree with you; Brie needs to do some investigating and figure out what is going on. And ack @ almost forgetting my story lol. I'm so sorry, updates will be much faster! Thanks!
Date: 10/03/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I'm glad that Brielle is supporting AJ in a way with her decision to move out for the time being, although it's nothing I expected to happen. I'm very curious as to how this will affect their relationship and AJ and Renee's relationship. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: She feels it's the best thing for right now. She knows he's already got a lot going on. Hopefully it won't be for too long lol. Thank you for all your support and reviews. I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 09/29/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
I can't wait to see where the story goes! Hope everything is well with you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm doing well, just busy with work.
Date: 09/28/10 02:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Hello, my sweetie! How are you??
I was thinking about you and the story. I hope you're alright and hope see you here soon!!!
Miss this!
Btw, I've send you a twitter request. I'm Gabibi_Lean!
God Bless,
Gabs.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for checking in on me. I'm doing good, just busy. Sorry for making everyone wait on an update. I hope you'll continue to read and review. :) And yes, I added you to my twitter!
Date: 09/02/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
She has to tell him. I am loving this still and can't wait for the next update. :) I know I sometimes don't leave a comment but stay assured I am hooked and am reading this. It's sometimes I get so busy I can't come by and tell you what an awesome job your doing. :)
Author's Response: Aww, well thanks so much for leaving comments when you do. :) I appreciate that. And thanks for your kind words. I hope you'll enjoy the updates to come.
Date: 08/30/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Seriously Bri just needs to listen to Lily... she's the voice of reason! :) Great update, I just hope nothing happens on his way to or from the hotel.... Hmmm Can't wait for the next one! As for names... Girls names: McKenna, Meredith, Kennedy, I'm not too good with the boys names! haha
Author's Response: Gosh, lol Lily really has taken on that role, hasn't she? Thanks so much for your constant reviews. And I have always loved the name Kennedy; it's actually a family name in my family. I'm def writing the suggestions down. Thanks so much!
Date: 08/30/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Great chapter. I'm so glad to see that they are getting closer. I can't wait to see what is coming next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 08/30/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
I'm glad that AJ and Brielle talked at the hotel and straightened a few things out. Ugh, Renee is really getting on my last nerve! Brie's right, AJ needs to put his foot down and make her stop using him because it's obvious that she is. Hopefully she'll be able to tell AJ her true feelings eventually when the time is right.
As for name suggestions, as you know that AJ's wife is pregnant for the second time in my story and I don't wanna suggest any names that I might use in it and in future stories 'cause I don't want them stolen. Sorry. lol I hope you understand. Actually, that reason sounds lame 'cause they're just names and it shouldn't be a big deal but I'm sure you get what I mean.
Anyway, this was another great update and as always I can't wait for the next one. :D
Author's Response: Yeah, AJ really needs to tell Renee how it's gonna be. She's walking all over him. Brielle is doing what she can to support him. And I totally understand about the name thing lol. I wouldn't want mine stolen too, but if there's any you think of you don't want to use, lemme know. :) Thanks for always letting me know how you think my fics are going. :)
Date: 08/30/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! As for baby names I like... for a boy-Landon..for a girl-Evelyn
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thank you for the suggestions, I'm writing 'em down now. :)
Date: 08/30/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
please don't make him screw up now. just go to the hotel and come back.
Author's Response: Aww lol, I'll letcha in on a little secret; he doesn't scew up. :)
Date: 08/30/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
WOW! This was the best by far! They are closer then ever, and I think they really haven't idea of how deep they are already together (in spirit).
For christ sake Brie, go run for your man! Don't be afraid of fear! You must live to have something! The man is there.. needing your answer! YOU are the one afraid... he did the move. It's your turn now.
Now that R thing... I thought what Alex did, give the phone to Brie was a way to show Bri that he was passing the key of his fears, thoughts... he's over.. he's done! Brie, it's your turn.. be a woman! Sometimes you need to make the move first.
Alex.. my poor thing.. ACT LIKE A MAN! Dump that whore! the process isn't easy and it involves a lot of pain... but it needs to be crossed.
I can't wait for more!!!!
The name..mmm. well, for girl: Giulia and boy: David!
Author's Response: Aww shucks, thanks lol. They really have gotten very close lately. And no, you're right, neither realize how deep that is. And yes, AJ made the first move, so she should be able to tell him how she feels. Let's hope she does. :) I love how excited you get with your reviews; they always make me smile. So thank you for leaving them for me. And how do you pronounce Giulia....is it like Julia?
Date: 08/30/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
AWWW. Ok I effin love this chapter. I would not change a thing.....and you need to update again like NOW.
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) Glad it's been Marissa approved.
Date: 08/27/10 09:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Yay! *does Special Ed* Yay! I got caught up, yay! LOL I told ya I would, even though right now I'm so sleepy I might have to come back and reread this chapter.
Gotta say, love the ending of the argument where she makes him admit that he wants to stop. That he's not just doing it for her her, but for him, too. Now, all he needs to do is shake the filthy parasite that is The Hussy and things should get a bit smoother. Hussy.
Hey, hey. What happened to the discussion questions? I want more of those, woman.
Anyway, this is where I'll leave this review. You're doing a fantastic job, even though I've already told you that. I don't see how anyone can not like the direction the fic is taking. What do they want? Brie and Alex are getting together... I mean... geeze. LOL. But yeah, you're doing so wonderful and you know it. I really would like to see some more journal entries, more Lily, and noooo don't make Denise leave. Gah.. lol.
But I can't believe I finally got caught up. Yay! *runs off like Phoebe & talking like Special Ed* Yay! Yay! yay!
Author's Response: Yay lol so glad you finally got caught up! And I'm so glad you like it and thank you for all your support and feedback. I will make note of the AJ journal entries and more Lily and Denise.
Date: 08/27/10 09:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Wow. I really, really, really love reading Alex's journal entry. You did a spectacular job with it, girl, you really did. Can we hope to see more entries like that? That might be kind of cool. Also, the comment about Nick's fat mouth made me laugh.
He frowned and turned away from her. That had been very sneaky and smart of her.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I really tried and I'm glad it showed. LOL @ Nick's fat mouth. All I can say is...well, it is AJ.
