Date: 06/28/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 33
LOOOVE that AC is back now. Seems weird reading on here now lol.
Anywho, LOVE this chapter. Totally hooked on this story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: LoL I know I got REALLY used to being able to read comments directly underneath each chapter. That was good in case I needed to go back for a refresher before responding :)
Date: 06/28/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 33
A "dildo" in the doctor's office? Only Nick would say that. I didn't know she was at a high risk for miscarriage. I hope she doesn't lose it. I think it would be fun if both her and Rochelle were pregnant on the tour. Keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Yeah he said that in With the Band when they first found out she was preggo's with Brooke :)
Date: 06/28/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 32
I knew she was pregnant. Good. They make excellent parents. And just for the record I would love to see his monkey. Yes I can be jealous of a fictious character. Closet sex with Nick. now that's a visual I won't soon for get. Awesome story. I let a few of my friends read it and I think they signed up just to get the updates. The best story out there.
Date: 06/28/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 31
Uh oh. I hope everything is ok. They have been through too much and deserve a day of peace. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 06/28/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh Sam is rating her out to Nick. Typical of a best friend. And I want to know why she is getting sick. Maybe she is pregnant. I hope so. Keep up the great work.
Date: 06/28/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
I've been reading your updates on the Dreamer's Sanctuary message board, but I didn't create an account to review.
I do like where this is going, except I can't help but be bothered that you made Liv be pregnant AGAIN. It's not healthy for women to get pregnant again so quickly after having a baby.
"When thinking about getting pregnant, the ideal time frame between deliveries is 15 months. Getting pregnant any sooner than 6 months post delivery can increase the risk of prematurity and low birth weight. A minimum of 15 months between deliveries gives your body enough time to heal and gives you enough time to regain your strength and energy."
http://www.ehow.com/how_4586686_time-pregnant-after-having-baby.html
It just doesn't sit right with me that this is happening, unless you want something to happen to their second baby. Or maybe you didn't consider the above when you decided this, I don't know.
Anyway, I'm still gonna faithfully read and review even though I have a bad feeling about this whole second pregnancy thing. Besides, it's Nick and Liv's fault, right? ;) And it's your story, you're gonna write what you want to. Just my opinion and just giving you honest feedback. :)
Author's Response: Oh believe me, I've done my homework and I also have a friend whose children are eleven months apart. In fact, Liv's doctor in the story went over those risks almost verbatim to what you quoted. But really, what's a doctor to do? Yell and scream and point fingers? Trust me, I don't like to jump into a plot line without having background information. Unfortunately, I don't want to get to much into it because that would really ruin any type of plotline that I'm working on along the way. But I love honest feedback and hope you will continue to enjoy the story. :)
Date: 06/28/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 29
Sam sounds like a lot of fun. And Nick naked in the closet be still my heart. I would make time for nookie with that man. I am so living this keep up the great work.
Date: 06/28/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 28
Ah no more babies. I think they both want another one. Maybe on their honeymoon. They seem more at ease however with those two I can't see their wedding going off without a hitch. Awesome chapter.
Date: 06/28/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 33
lenniluvsbrian:
11 months apart....lol. Figures Nick would somehow get that to happen. They're sooo cute together!
I thought of my sister, when that fan told him her sister used to love him. Mine used to love him too - then she "grew-up" & told me she only liked them when she "was young & stupid". I replied with, "Well, guess I'm still young & stupid then." Lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 06/28/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh lord another baby. That will make life more exciting. Like they need that. At least they will be good parents. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 06/28/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 26
Blue hair?!?! I would have strangled her. And Nick laughing. Typical man. Of course his sexy dance will work. Good lord it would work on a dead woman. Anything that man does would. Yummy!!
Author's Response: lol I would love to see that work on a dead woman!
Date: 06/28/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 25
Finally some peace for them. They deserve it. And he's right team BSB does work fast. I am very muck team Nick. Who isn't. And I will leave the last line of the chapter alone except Lord would it be nice to be in that position.
Author's Response: lol tell me about it. Can an author be jealous of her own fictious character??
Date: 06/28/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh shit this has to be harder on Angel than on anyone. Aaron is her twin, part of her soul. I just hope he can be saved. Awesome pov chapter. Keep up the great work.
Date: 06/28/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 23
Well shit you really know how to write action chapters. I am glad they got caught and everyone is safe. And what a surprise that Liv's mom is dating an FBI agent. Cute. Now that fucktard and Aaron are in jail they can resume their wedding plans. I just want to know what will happen to Aaron? Keep up the awesome work. Your the best.,
Author's Response: I LOVE action chapters. They are by far the easiest to write. I don't realize that I'm seven, eight pages into it until I go back and proofread. :)
Date: 06/28/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 22
OH HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!! Aaron really fucked up on this one. And Hunter should be burned alive. I really hope Nick gets A LOT more security now. They will need it. I wonder if Aaron can be saved now? Keep up the awesome work.
