Date: 01/09/11 07:01 am Title: Chapter 34
LOVED this chapter!!! So clever of Nick, to find the bug and communicate with Brian through notes. And I loved him noticing the tell, too. And the ending... gah!! What choice does he have but to go with Roger? I wonder how he's gonna get out of this one or what will happen if he does go... Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: I have to say i have enjoyed making Nick smart in this story. LOL I can see him having the insight to do something like that either way but maye in real life it would be more because he accidentally trips over his feet and knocks the lamp off the table lol We shall see what happens with Roger! Thanks for the review Julie!
Date: 01/09/11 06:28 am Title: Chapter 34
Good grief Mare, you may as well put Nick out of his misery and kill him :P LOL. I loved the chapter, definitely on the edge of my seat hoping to find out what's next! You and your cliffies :P
Author's Response: I could never kill my Nick. He's too Nick to kill. LOL Thanks for reading Rose!
Date: 01/09/11 06:16 am Title: Chapter 34
I really liked the flashbacks in this chapter. the one at the beginning was really terrifying, I could really feel the dear of young Nick. I also liked when Nick's dad was trying to teach him how to lie, and when Kevin said that it was wasy to tell when Nick was lying because he wore it like a neon sign on his forehead, lol! I liked Nick and Brian's conversation through the notes, awww Frick and Frack! Great update, Mare! I am scared for Nick to be alone with Roger :(
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I'm glad you think the first flashback was scary. I really am trying to show what a horrible person Roger is before he and Nick possibly set out alone. Also glad you enjoyed the Frick and Frack moments. I enjoy throwing those in there every so often. Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 01/09/11 05:59 am Title: Chapter 33
Whoa, Roger! Awesome and terrifying! I'm glad Nick found the guys, it seems like he had such a hard time lying to them. I can't blame him for that. Hopefully this mess will be over soon enough for poor Nick! Great chapter, Mare! I'm off to the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Yeah, he didn't enjoy having to lie to the guys. Poor Nick :O(
Date: 01/03/11 07:37 am Title: Chapter 33
Way to go cliffy on me just before school goes back on again LOL. Curses! :P Man, poor Nick, now he's faced with his new worst nightmare and he's supposed to keep his cool despite all of it.
Loved it :).
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. lol but at least I got that far. LOL Thanks again! :O)
Date: 01/03/11 07:33 am Title: Chapter 32
Okay, I love that you mentioned the library video LMAO. That's just awesome. Not Nick's best showing of acting haha.
Awesome chapter, not sure myself if Nick can pull it off. Love him and all, but yeah, acting's not his thing.
I don't blame him for feeling weird about everything with Jane. How could he not? He thought she was dead for so long and really she's just been hidden.
Author's Response: Gotta give love to the Library video and Nick's acting skills. Poor guy. lol Yeah, considering all the crap going on with Jane, he's taking it quite well. Thanks for reading Rose! :O)
Date: 01/03/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 33
oh noo... it's roger run nick run
nice twist mare i thought all of nick's worries were over but nope once i'm calm and peaceful you throw me for another loop good chapter your updates have gotten faster.... good for you :) !!!
Author's Response: thanks but don't get too used to the faster updates. I had a week off of school. I go back tomorrow lol Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 01/02/11 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 33
Phew, I'm so glad Max fell for it, although it must've been hard for Nick to lie to the boys like that. Glad he didn't slip up!
Oh god, I think my hands started to sweat too when I realised that Curtis was Roger!
Great chapter Mare (as always), and I can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Yeah, poor Nick with all that stuff to worry about. He's going to be gray by the time this is all over. LOL
Date: 01/02/11 02:36 am Title: Chapter 33
Ooh, Roger! Dun dun dun! Another great chapter; I'm glad Nick is back with the guys, though how hard was that for him to have to lie to them?! At least he pulled it off. I'm loving all the updates!! Too bad school has to start again, just when you were on a roll... ugh! Hopefully it'll be less crazy than it was before break though. :)
Author's Response: Yes, it shouldn't be as crazy since the next concert isn't until March! Hooray!! lol It's been nice just having the time to sit and write. I miss summer!! Like I was saying before, I picture Nick lying to the guys all the time but now that he wants to tell the truth and can't it's killing him! Poor Nick! Thanks for reading Julie! :O)
Date: 01/02/11 02:19 am Title: Chapter 33
Oh my God, I knew it! I knew the second they walked in that door that the other guy was actually going to be Roger, I just knew it!!! lol I wonder how Nick, and his family especially all the things he told Kevin, is going to handle this? Thanks Mare, and happy New Year.
Author's Response: Hey Sam! Happy New Year to you too! Yeah, I figured it would be obvious but you guys had to know I was going to bring him into the story at some point. LOL Glad to see you are still reading! :O)
Date: 01/02/11 12:48 am Title: Chapter 33
Good that the plan is working, I feel bad too that he has to lie to the guys... But I know is for the best. I so hate Max! And I can't believe Roger is with them! Happy New Year! :)
Author's Response: I know, Roger will add an interesting wrench in the plans. Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 01/02/11 12:04 am Title: Chapter 33
Aw yay they are together again! It must be so hard for Nick to lie to them the way he is, but its for the best. Hopefully things come to a head soon...eagerly waiting for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! Yup, it's hard for him which is funny because im' sure he lies to them about other things all the time. In my world anyway lol
Date: 01/01/11 03:17 am Title: Chapter 32
LMFAO thank you for the L-I-B-R-A-R-Y video reference; that made me giggle! So did "Wow, once again you have to re-examine your life when you can use a sentence like that as a starting point of a conversation." and "I saluted him, not sure why. Maybe because I’m a major in the Army of Dork!" LOL Good comic relief in this chapter. Much needed, cause otherwise it was pretty sad, with the whole flashback of Nick being locked in the freezer, and suspenseful, all the build-up of going back to Max. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!
Author's Response: I knew you'd get a kick out of the library reference lol and yay for you mentioning what were my favorite lines in there as well. Thanks for reading and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oooh I'm very interested in this plan of theirs. It will be very interesting to see how Nick can get Max to believe him. I liked the scene at the end with Nick and his mom, it seemed very eerie, but sweet at the same time. Great chapter, Mare :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph and Happy New Year! :O)
Date: 12/31/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 32
Happy New Year to you too!
Great chapter, I thought Nick's reaction to his mum was great, he would be a bit wary at first but then want her attention. Roger sounds like a right nasty bastard! I like the line "major in the army of dork". Looking forward to more but also sad that it's coming to an end. Wonder who'll get out of it all alive?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line! I actually laughed when i wrote it. Yeah I think he would be really weary of her and not want to get too close. They have a lot of catching up to do. Thanks for reading Steph! :O)
