Date: 12/13/10 11:20 am Title: Chapter 30
Yay for a cliffhanger free chapter!
It was good to hear some of the background story. Poor Nick and his family though, that must've been a tough year that he was away from them. It's no wonder Nick thought of Nicole as his mother, little kids adapt quickly! Bit of a shocker that the Richardsons were involved in the CIA stuff!
Looking forward to more. Hope you have a lovely Christmas x
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Steph! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas as well. :O)
Date: 12/12/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 30
AMAZING FANFIC! I mean, wow... Is fantastic, I've been baiting my nails since the begining of the story! Poor Nick... All the things that he has been through, must be hard on him. I trusted in Max!! Can't believe that he was the bad guy... This story is amazing, keep up the excellent work, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the review :O)
Date: 12/12/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 30
oh wow.. all i have to say is good chapter and what happens next??
Author's Response: We shall see what happens next. Thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 12/05/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 29
Your updates are the highlight of my weekend! I think the uncertainty has been resolved, but will you twist it again:? Thinking of writing my own story - just waiting for the right idea to strike. Keep it up. Loving it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliment. :O) I hope you do get write your own story
Date: 12/05/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter, Mare.. Although my head hurts because I had to think so hard to keep up with the whole story Bob and Jane are telling..
Author's Response: My head has been hurting ever since I started writing this thing lol Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 12/05/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter as always Mare! You always manage to surprise me with all these twists. I hope Nick lets her tell the rest of the story, like where she vanished to for all those years and why she killed the woman he thought was his mother.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! There is a lot to reveal but it's all going to be coming out over the next two chapters. :O)
Date: 12/05/10 10:17 am Title: Chapter 29
Damn, can't wait to hear more of her story. I can't imagine how Nick is feeling with all this new info about his life, but at least he has Kevin there with him.
Author's Response: yes, thank goodness for Kevin. :O) Thanks Sel!
Date: 12/05/10 09:18 am Title: Chapter 29
Wow wow wow! So much in this chapter! Loved Nick's way of getting out of watching gory stuff in horror movies lol. I love how Kevin is there for him and is keeping Nick calm. I do not like Jane or where she is going with her story. Not at all. Sorry my review was late, for some reason I did not get notified by email of the update!
Author's Response: aww, that's okay. I'm just happy you're still reading since you hadn't reviewed the last two chapters, I was afriad you'd given up on this one lol I'm not a Jane fan at all either. We shall see what happens! Thanks Tracy! :O)
Date: 12/05/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 29
Gah, just when we were finally getting some details, you had to stop in the middle of the story! Oh well, glad to get SOME info, anyway... Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: To my defense, theer is a lot of info. I had to spread it out over two chapters otherwise it would have been an epically long chapter. LOL thanks for reading Julie!
Date: 12/05/10 02:54 am Title: Chapter 29
i just remebered the black haired girl's name its nicole!! but if nicole isn't nick/andrew's mom then why were they so attached?? Oh well i guess i just have to wait till next week!! man i love your work mare :)
Author's Response: Thanks again! Yes, you'll find out all of that stuff next week. :o)
Date: 12/05/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 29
dangit... i love this story so much and i still don't know why the black haired girl had to die!!
Author's Response: aww lol thanks! We shall find out in the next chapter. :O)
Date: 12/03/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 28
woah woah woah. wait. so Nickolas is Jane's son? I read that right, right?
and jane killed Nick/Andrew's real mom?
WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON YO?
now im worried about the other boys and what Max is gonna do to them :((((
Also, Max killed Martin. LMAO!
Author's Response: lmao yes, get it? Max Martin? hehehe I am clever, aren't I? You are correct on all accounts. Nickolas IS Jane's Son and she killed Nicole. Thanks for reading Mers. You rock! :O)
Date: 12/03/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 27
crap. I cant help wondering which mom this is. the dead never stay dead, i swear!
and KEVIN!!!! so we lost 3 boys and got 1 back lol...i can only imagine the state of panic the others are in. and what are they gonna do now? They have Max back in the hotel to deal with. Eeep!
Author's Response: LOL you said Eeep! Yes, we can't have them all together at once yet!
Date: 11/29/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter 28
What?! She killed Nick's real mother? I would not have expected that.. and the other guys are stuck with Max. Scary, I hope they're okay. At least Kevin and Nick are safe. Really great job with this Mare, you are so good at getting inside 15 year old Nick's head and all the little details and plot points. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I just kind of summon the inner 15 year old boy inside of me. LOL Glad to know you're still reading. :O)
Date: 11/29/10 03:22 am Title: Chapter 27
YAY KEVIN!! And also, Nick's mom?! That was a shock! But not really Nick's mom... Nickolas's mom?! You and your cliffhangers, lucky for me I have another chapter to read! Loved this one!
Author's Response: LOL YAY kevin! :O)
