Date: 11/29/10 03:14 am Title: Chapter 26
I still don't know if I can trust this Nickolas dude, he still feels kind of shady to me. All the christmas lights and music in this chapter just made it feel very eerie. I hope the other guys are able to catch up to Nick! Really good chapter, Mare! Very suspenseful as always :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the Christmas carols added a nice creepy feel to things lol thanks Stpeh!
Date: 11/28/10 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter Mare!! I'm so glad his Dad was really there, I was beginning to think he was really dead and that Nickolas was maybe the bad guy. I hope the rest of the boys will be OK, Max is very devious, so I have a feeling it's going to be bad news for someone :( I wonder why Jane killed Nick's real Mum? She must be something to do with Max.
Can't wait for next week!!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I wouldn't worry too much about the other guys, remember I do have a rule lol
Date: 11/28/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 28
OH MY GOSH!! I've read fanfiction where Jane is evil, crazy, mean, but never twisted enough to kill,
furthormore you just cut off the chapter like THAT i mean sure it's really dramatic but now i'm going to be thinking about this all week wondering whats going to happen!!
Author's Response: Sorry about that, It just seemed like a good place to stop. LOL what can I say? You gotta love killer Jane. Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 11/28/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 28
Wow. Great chap, Mare. Seems like some things are starting to come together. I'm glad that Kevin is safe, but I can't blame Nick for being confused and angry. Now I really hope that he boys will be ok. Very interested to find out Max's real role in all of this and what happened with Nick's "moms."
Oh and LOVED the part with Kevin and the bible. Makes me LOL just picturing it.
Author's Response: Thanks Sel, yes Kevin will most likely go to hell because of all the use of the Bible asa weapon! Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 11/28/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 28
Jeez, Mare LOL. Even when you give us more info, I end up feeling more confused than ever! At least we know Nick's dad and Kevin are both alive and well. Can't wait to hear the story of what happened with his mom! This story is so different from anything else out there; I love it!
Author's Response: Sometims i'm afriad that the writers of Lost are taking over my body or something. If I put a polar bear in this, just shoot me! lol I'm glad you think it's original! That makes me smile :O) Jane's story is coming up in the next chapter and I keep saying WTF? as i'm writing it. We shall see what happens lmao thanks for reading Julie!
Date: 11/28/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 28
Okay I'm tired of saying WTF in these reviews lmao. But again, what I love about your suspense stories is that you do keep me constantly guessing. Poor Nick, he's so confused and trying to keep track of what the hell is going on LOL.
Poor Boys! See! That Nickolas shouldn't have left them behind! He should've known they'd go back to Max and try to help Nick! Bah :P
Author's Response: LOL Well they were bonheads for going back there! I kept telling them not to...but NO! They go anyway! I'm happy for all those WTFs as long as it's a good WTF and not a bad WTF? I like to keep everyone on their toes, including poor confused Nick Thanks for reading Rose!
Date: 11/25/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 27
Holy shit!! What a twist! Lol at "I'm a friggen' pop star!!" yes Nick, you are. I cracked up at "What would Kevin do?" That's the new slogan. The ending was awesome and now I'm dying to know more!
Author's Response: Thanks Sel. We need someone to make a WWKD braclet! lol
Date: 11/22/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter Mare! I still don't know what to think of Nickolas, but I don't think he's the bad guy anymore (although I could be totally wrong).
So glad that Kevin is alive and safe, I wonder about Nick's Dad though, and the woman he thought was his Mum.
Looking forward to more next weekend and hope you have a good Thanksgiving :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! :O)
Date: 11/21/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh my God. How can you stop now? I am curious... Is Nicholas really a good guy and Max a bad guy? I don´t know what to think!
Author's Response: I know that was a mean place to stop it. We shall see lol thanks for reading Milka! :O)
Date: 11/21/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 27
ok um...whoa that through me for a loop... another cliffhanger what happens next!!!
Author's Response: hehe we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 11/21/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter 27
WAHHH!!!! Your chapter endings in this story are always epic! I still don't know quite who or what to believe. I'm thinking it's a good sign that Kevin was actually there, alive, but I still don't quite believe everything Nickolas is saying and that Max was really a bad guy all along. And it gets even more interesting now that Jane is back in the picture. I loved how you wrote the twist ending! Another awesome chapter!
Author's Response: LOL thanks. Yes, i'm really cliffy happy in this one. It just kind of keeps working out that way. Thanks for reading Julie! :O)
Date: 11/21/10 02:29 am Title: Chapter 27
WTF?
That about sums up my reaction lol. But yay! Kevin's here! (Kevin makes everything better LOL.) I love that Kevin yet again used a random book as a weapon. Bonus points if it's the bible again lmao.
Jane...why am I not surprised she didn't even acknowledge Nick?
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Because Jane's a wench! LOL I had to have Kevinuse a book a weapon. It seemed fitting and you are right, Kevin makes everything better. I missed him. Thanks for reading Rose!
Date: 11/18/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter 26
OMG you have got to be kidding me! My money was on Nickolas so he better be the good guy here missy! Maybe he's trying not to involve the rest of the guys, maybe it's slowing them down? (is hopeful). but leaving them with Max is not a good move either. Hmmm...can we please have your story be trained to follow your ideas and not go their merry way too often because you're giving us more cliffies lady! (ok so that's a good thing but sometimes, like today, it's NOT, curious mind wants to know!).
Author's Response: aww, it's so weird seeing you post on here lol I have some more to send to you but i'm not done with the next chapter and I wish that this story would let me decided what to do. The characters have been very renegade! :OP Thanks for the review lol
Date: 11/15/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 26
What the..... I.. I.. I just don't know what to say.. gosh.. I hope everyone will be okay.. and reunited soon too!
Author's Response: Thanks lol glad I left you speechless :OP
Date: 11/15/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 26
Whoops I have been a bad girl. I forgot to review...omg he took Nick!!!! The guys must be freaking out! I knew something was off when Nickolas was pushy about them running and getting out in a hurry. Now he has Nick separated from the others, I wonder what will happen next! I had to lol at CVS because my mom works in one. The subway smells as well, because I'm from Jersey and the many times I have been to NYC there is always a weird smell. Awesome chapter! Oh and I love the speaking in pig Latin thing, how Howie starts with the Spanish when he is mad. I also liked how they kept stopping to help each other. Ok I'm done rambling now lol. Loved the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Tracy! Yep, gotta love the funky smells of NY and just CVS in general. It's one of my happy places!
