Date: 09/27/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! I wonder if he'll find what he wants in Max's room, or will someone catch him in there? Hmm, we'll see.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! :O)
Date: 09/26/10 08:07 am Title: Chapter 19
Another great chap, Mare. Love the way you did the flashbacks this time around :) It was different to have him awake but in a trance. I'm so glad that the guys are so supportive and caring.
And poor Nick :( He's so confused about his past and now this happens to his house. I have to say that I thought something happened to Kevin's family.
Author's Response: Thanks Sel! Aww, nope they are okay...for now *insert sinister dun dun dun* lol Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/26/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 19
Awwww poor nicky. Losing your home is not fun at all. He must be feeling so scared. The dreams are getting crazy! Glad the boys are so understanding. I hope Nick doesn't get himself into trouble going to max's room! Great chapter as always!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It's Nick! You know trouble will find him wherever he goes! lol
Date: 09/26/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter 19
I have no words this time. At least nothing helpful. I'm worried for the Boys, if they burned down Nick's home... it won't be long before they track them down.
I also loved the way you addressed the flashback, not cheesy, but in actual flashes. I could totally picture it and it reminded me of how they do it in TV shows.
Loved it. :)
Author's Response: aww thanks Rose! YAY i'm glad you liked the flashbacks. I'm always worried they will come off to cheesy or cliched but I was going to the tv flashback thing, so i'm happy it came across that way.
Date: 09/26/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 19
Aw, poor Nicky! Glad we're getting more of the story about the fire. And glad Bob's not dead - that we know of. Can't wait to see what they find out next! Great update!
Author's Response: Wow, you were fast! lol Yup, slowly we'll start finding things out now. :O) thanks for reading!
Date: 09/19/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
This Max is a very interesting character. So, hmmmm. Bob in the CIA? That makes sense, I can't wait to find out what Nick will remember (or if he will). Love the comment about the paper cut from the bookmark. I was cracking up.
And HOLY CLIFFIE!! Damn, can't believe you're gonna make us wait for that one. Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Sel! Like I keep telling everyone, I forgot I ended it with a cliffy lol sorry about that!
Date: 09/19/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh, you did not just end it like that! Curse you and your cliffhangers!! LOL Other than that, it was another great chapter! Glad we're getting a little more info. I like that Nick's dad and Max were good guys and not involved in something shady. Can't wait for the next update to find out what happened and if Bob is dead...
Author's Response: LOL thanks Julie. Yeah, I didn't want to go the bad guy running from the law way. :O)
Date: 09/19/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
No a cliffhanger till next weekend lol, I hope Kevin didn't find out anything to bad, wow Bob in the CIA, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :O) I actually forgot I had a cliffhanger in this chapter lol
Date: 09/19/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
Another cliffhanger *bites nails*
Great chapter though, and I'm beginning to warm to Max, he's not as emotionless as I imagined him to be.
So they were in the CIA, I knew it had to be something like that or the mafia!
Looking forward to the next chapter to see what's going on with Kevin.
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Glad to know you're warming up to Max. I hope everyone else does as well lol :O)
Date: 09/19/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 18
Awwww now what's wrong? That said, wow at all the information in this chapter. CIA? Seriously? Yeesh. But you know Max is hiding something huge, and that there's a big reason why he doesn't want Nick to remember.
I'm happy Nick couldn't go through with his immensely dumb idea. I love the goober but it's like don't be stupid! LOL. I love Nick and Brian and how you portray them, it's just so cute.
Author's Response: Thanks Rose! :O)
Date: 09/19/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 18
OMG.....Nick's dad worked for the CIA. Big surprise. I feel bad for Nick, he wants to connect with his uncle and he wants answers, but Max is holding something more from him, he isn't telling him everything. I was sad that Nick wanted to leave the guys behind, and I wonder what Kevin's phone call was about. Can't wait to see the next chapter, you got me hooked as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, Bob in the CIA lol I do chuckle just thinking about it but stranger things have happened I guess. Thanks for reading :O)
Date: 09/14/10 05:58 am Title: Chapter 17
aww at least they had a nice Christmas, I hope Max says no to Nick.
Author's Response: Yes, a nice Christmas is always a good thing. Thanks for reading :O)
Date: 09/12/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aww I'm glad they managed to have a lovely Christmas even under the circumstances. Nice of Nick to think of taking a plate of food to Max, I just hope no one is lurking outside the room to ambush him!
That food does sound mouth watering, but I'm thinking biscuits aren't the same as biscuits here!
Looking forward to next week's chapter :)
Author's Response: LOL no, i'm pretty sure our biscuits are different than yours although I do enjoy me some english biscuits as well :O) Thanks for the review Steph!
Date: 09/12/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
I really hope he won't leave the guys.. although I understand why he's thinking about doing so.. Poor little guy.. Great story, Mare!
Author's Response: Thanks! :O) he is being a noble little panda, isn't he? lol
Date: 09/12/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 17
Aw this chap was all warm and fuzzy. Love the meal from all the moms, and the note was really sweet. There are so many one liners in your stories that just crack me up.
I really hope that Nick doesn't try to leave with Max like a moron. lol. And I can't believe that Kevin is ok with him going to Max's room all alone! Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Yup, apparently Kevin had one too many spiked eggnogs to care I guess lol I'm glad you like the one liners. hehe :O) Thanks for the review Sel!
