Date: 08/02/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 17
next one please thanks :D
Date: 08/01/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey there! Just letting you know that your story Beautiful Lie is the featured story of the month and has a discussion thread open on the forum. Not sure if you're a member or not but you might want to join so you can take part in the commenting. :O)
Author's Response:
aah thanks for that. Thats so cool. Posted over there now :)
Date: 08/01/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Its sexy time!! Lol
Date: 08/01/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow your story is getting better again and I still love your writing style... please let the next one a streamy hot sexy chapter be :) i could be they have a threesome, right? ohhh c'mon let them have fun together ;)
sorry that I wasn't that into your story anymore but I'll give it another chance coz I still love how you write :) soooo please if you already wrote the next chapter give it to us :) thanks and take care
Date: 08/01/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
that's not fair... to stop now... i want to know if paige and nick will have a hot night or not... and if linds tells andy about her feelings for him... so PLEASE update another chapter...today ;)
greetings.... MEL=)
Date: 07/30/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!!!!HE WOULD STILL BE WITH HER IF SHE HADN'T BROKEN THINGS OFFF!!!!!!!!!YES!!!!!!!!!no w paige has to get out of the picture somehow, and things can go back to how they were supose to be!!!!!LINDS ANDNICK 4EVER!!!!
Date: 07/30/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
awesome job cant waait for more.
Date: 07/30/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
itīs really a pity, that andy and nick couldnīt talk properly about their problems. it seems that they have competition, "who knows lindsay more and who loves her more"
andy is jealous because lindsay loves nick endlessly, and nick is jealous because andy is sharing his bed with her.
but nick is the one whoīs engaged... so maybe he should take a deep breath and step back....
and lindsay and paige did it again... they make out... i wonder why...
lindsay and andy falling for each other... fine.. but in the same time i had the feeling, that one word from nick were enough and she were back in his arms again. does she love him, or the fact, that he loves her and that she isnīt alone
one thing makes me pensive, does nick really really have stayed with lindsay, when she hadnīt left him???????????????? wow... now iīm speechless... i always thought, that he and paige always had go back together... no matter what....
greetings from austria... now iīm away for some days... vacation.
but please update.... i hope i can read it with my phone!!! ;o) review is following when iīm back... ^^
still love your story...
Date: 07/30/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
what happened with andy and nicks friendship? it seems they no longer can talk to each other... at all, when it comes to lindsay! What's nicks problem??? there's no reason for him to be jealous or protect her...
she is old enough, to know, what she is doing and it seems, andy really likes her!!! and andy is right, nick wasn't there for her, when she needed someone to talk... the one hand he says he wants, that she is happy and the other, he is again so pissed off, when he talks with andy about her...
and nick really would be still together with linds, if she hadn't left him... seriously???
wow... the girly night was hot and i'm sure it would become even hotter, if andy hadn't disturbed ^^... i'm surprised he wasn't mad, and left them alone again... and what's that... linds is in love with andy... :D great... he is the best, that's happened to her in a long time...
great chapters.... can't wait for more MEL=)
Date: 07/29/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
i'm the same opinion like the others... i would have liked to see, if nick and paige, had both caught, when they had sex...^^ but paige alread knew, what happened... she knows linds to well and it seems andy was a little bit to wild Lol...
okay... i can't wait to read what will happen, when they'll have their boys and girls night...so please update!!!!!!
great chapter as always...love your story... MEL=)
Date: 07/29/10 10:01 am Title: Chapter 13
hehe amazing job. cant wait for more.
