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Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 40

They are so cute I could barf. Really. They're going on about soul mates at 16 years old! But I love it. :)

Author's Response: LoL they are cute. But dare I say there might be a little more drama before it's all said and done? Hmmmm

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 41

Oh the pain of young love separation. I hope she makes the right decision regarding moving. I think it will effect AJ the most. He really loves her. Please update soon and keep up thew excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: well, it won't be too much longer. The next six or seven chapters are going to go extremely fast.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 40

Oh Shelby you are so right. Love will do all of those things to you. I just hope you make the right decision about moving. Please update soon I can't wait to see how this all ends.
Marguerite

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 40

Aww I love this chapter,very nice. Should be interesting what her mom and dad say about her wanting to move to Kentucky. Aww at them being soulmates. cute chapter.Hope they are not apart for to long.

Author's Response: Yeah I don't think mom and dad like the idea...that's why they keep pushing it off. But they can't keep doing that, can they? :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 40

Ah love. :) Great job.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 40

Awww. Such a sweet little chapter. :) I'm glad they finally got some alone time!

*guards door with my pointy sticks just in case*

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: LoL they're safe if you're on guard! :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 40

Awww amazing job can't wait for more. I hope they do move up there.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 40

oh man she in between ppl move little closer to Mason but that means she leaves her family :(

Author's Response: Yup that's a big choice. I don't know if I could even make that decision!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 39

She gonna be gr8 mommy b/c u know what they want when they start to cry. I When we learn more about Peyton im gonna love her. The little twins they are little cutie but dont act that way. It good to see Ally and Brooke she needs some only neally her age :). Joe they just no words for him lol mini Nick n AJ together means trouble lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 39

Lol. I figured they'd get stuck baby-sitting. Disney on Ice is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Well at least they got alone time! Even if it was with a baby and Shelby was freaking out. :) I so want to go to Disney on Ice sometime. It never comes around here.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 38

Roflmao! I knew Mason would punch that asshole! good riddance!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I'm sure Mason would have bashed him in if the security mall cop dudes hadn't showed up! If he needed backup I'm sure you would have supplied a pointy stick (or two)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh Shelby and Mason this was easy. You get to give him back. When yours gets here you are stuck. I however think they will do fine. Please update soon I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
Marguerite

Author's Response: You're right...it's always okay baby-sitting because you know there's an end to it. Parenting...not so much. :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 39

Aww i might be going to Disney on ice in October HAHA!!

Poor Shel. She's really feeling scared right now. Mason's confidence is definitely affecting her. Still, it should be some comfort knowing if she can't handle it then he might.

But then again she has alot on her shoulders. Everyone expects the mom to be able to handle everything. But what people don't see behind doors is the fact that moms don't always handle everything. I think she's really lucky to have Mason, who's seems so ready for this.

Author's Response: That's so cool! I love Disney on Ice. :) Mason's being strong for both of them, which is another reason he makes THE perfect boyfriend!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 39

Hehe poor Shelby. She will be an amazing mom when she has the baby. Awesome chapter can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Whiny Shelby is fun to write, lol

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Shelby.......I couldn't imagine feeling so deflated!!!! Mason is going to make an amazing dad..
The thing that keeps going thru my head is "it's always different when it's your own"

Author's Response: you're not the only one that's thinking that april!