Date: 09/03/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 39
Oh yes sweetie... baby thing IS a hard work! But the 'suck suck suck' sound is just heaven!
Lovely moments and Mas is a Carter two? lol
LOVELY!
Author's Response: Ah, Mason does kind of remind me of Nick...except way less ADHD. :) And I love the 'paci' sound!
Date: 09/03/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 39
Aw, a little preview to the family life for Shel and Mas. This is too cute
Btw, the leashes for Tristan and Bryaden were good ideas, I think they'd terrorize the poor Disney characters.
Author's Response: Yeah, just a sneak preview. Of course Landon's probably the easiest Carter baby of them all. Anything would be easy compared to Brooke! Annnnd...All I can see is Mickey Mouse's ear being snapped off...seriously, I wouldn't put it past them!
Date: 09/03/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 39
"I sniffled. Ice cream did sound good. I mean, if I was going to be a lousy mother I might as well just drown my sorrows in creamy goodness, right?" - LMAO and the lines about her being a fat cow and whatnot were great too. :D
I had to smile at Mason laying on the couch with Landon on his chest, it reminds me of a similar scene... ;) Great job, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I loved Shelby's hormonal lines. It's always so fun to whine. Hmm, I have no idea what similar scene you could POSSBILY be thinking about. :) Yeah, I know I was having that same little flashback when I wrote that. Ah, how fast time flies!
Date: 09/03/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 39
I think Joe is my favorite McLean kid...I swear, he's just AJ reincarnet..they are sooooo in for it!
Shelby will be just fine when her baby is born. It's always different with other ppls kids. And Mason seems like a natural. Yeah, they are gonna be just fine.
Author's Response: Well, I do love rowdy children and Joe is really pushing that limit. It's going to be fun once Ally's story comes around. I've already made notes about good old Jonah. :)
Date: 09/03/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 38
Aw, go Mason! Be her knight in shining armor! Yay about the promise ring and the baby's first movements! LMAO at Jonah's one line, I love him! :D
Author's Response: LoL I love him too. I saw a gorgeous garnet ring at the jewelers a couple days ago and loved it even though its not my birthstone. So, that's what she got for christmas!
Date: 09/03/10 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 38
"What does he have to promise? He's kind of stuck with you now that you're pregos," Joe said."
That line had me laughing so hard, nothing are more annoying than little brothers :) Shel and Mas are so cute together, and i'm so happy that he didn't propose.. It's way to soon for them to get married.. They should just focus on getting ready for when the baby comes, and maybe read a book or two about how to handle a newborn (even if I can't stand those books, nobody wrote a book on YOUR baby) =p
Author's Response: LoL that is my FAVORITE line. Seriously. Joe's like the replacement Shelby in the smart-aleck kid department. And I agree...every baby is different!
Date: 09/03/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 38
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MASON!!! *pumps fist in the air* Give that little prick a beatdown!! YES!!!
Author's Response: LoL he got what he deserved for sure!
Date: 09/03/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh yes I was waiting for this. Frank sounds like he could have been dangerous. Now however Mason gave him something to think about. I knew AJ would react that way. Just a dad thing. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I think Frank was just an a-hole. But Mason's got Shelby's back and won brownie points with poppa McLean, so it's all good!
Date: 09/03/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 37
Oh lord what a surprise. I bet she loved it. Her family is crazy but have a lot of love for each other. I wonder what is in the box? Please update soon. Awesome work as always.
Marguerite
Date: 09/03/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
my little bean had a great daddy
Seriously best line ever!!!!! Love it! Great story!!! Jen you are gifted!!!
Author's Response: LoL thanks april, glad you're lovin' it!
Date: 09/03/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 38
My double review coming right up HAHA
Love Jonah. He's a right character. Kinda makes me think thats how AJ was when he was a kid. With the sarcastic comments and everything.
Ally is a sweetheart as well. I love hers and Shelbys relationship. You can just tell theres a sisterly bond there.
And yay... Mas came from christmas. I loved how Shel thought he was asking to feel the baby clothes, and not her actual tummy.
So glad it was a promise ring and not an engagement ring. Sure they have a baby on the way but they have a loooooong time before they should get engaged. They may have known each other for most of their life, but they have only been together as a couple not that long.
Gooo Mason!! He kicked butt and that Frank deserved it. Freaking tool! If Mas hadn't of kicked Franks butt i was going to suggest writing me in and getting me to kick his butt haha!
And awwwwwwwwww at her feeling the baby move. It's getting more and more real for her as time gets on. Even though its overwhelming her i still believe she will be fully prepared when the baby comes.
Little Bean. Best nickname ever for her baby.
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm writing Joe thinking about just how AJ could have been as a kid - it's really fun actually. :) And I know people were freaking out about the engagement ring but I so didn't want to go there yet. If I had, Shelby was going to say no. You're right; they HAVEN'T been together as a couple that long and they have a big enough challenge coming up. LoL Frank getting beat up was great. I was going to make it into a long drawn out thing but then I thought - no, Mason would so clean house quickly. Also totally agree on the 'little bean' nickname. I love it, haha.
Date: 09/03/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 38
I'm kinda glad it was just a promise ring, an engagement ring is a HUGE step. Sure she's pregnant but still.
Mason and the breast pump was hilarious, poor Mas.
And when Frank walked up I was just waiting for Mason to kick his ass! Richardson men don't play around when it comes to thier girls!!
P.S.- Thank you for the early update. :) I was thinking about it so much I dreamt that I was Shelby.
Author's Response: Yeah I totally agree. Mason is sixteen and that's an enormous commitment. So I have to say Kevin was right in putting his foot down there. And I've been dying to match up Frank and Mason since I put him in the story. As for your P.S. - you are so totally welcome :)
Date: 09/03/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 38
Aw, I thought it was going to follow the song. Marry me Juliet, you'll never have to be alone.. LOL But that's good for me. They don't need to do everything at once. Good for Mason for beating up the jerk. It scored some brownie points with AJ too. Ha ha. Great update.
Author's Response: I SO want to comment on those lyrics but I'm not going to right now. :) Brownie points with AJ is ALWAYS a good thing!
Date: 09/03/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 38
- The corners of dad's mouth twitched.
"Good." -
I reaaally like AJ more now!
I wish I had a guy like Mason lol, he really is the perfect boyfriend. (:
Frank's an a-hole.
Author's Response: I thought people would enjoy AJ's reaction! :)
Date: 09/03/10 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 38
Awwww amazing job can't wait for more. Way to go mas. Hehe.
