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Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 38

Shoot me down why don't ya? lol. I thought for sure he was proposing and little Ally she's more excited than Shel.

But a promise ring is just as good. And I'm seeing that AJ is starting to get along with Mason, I mean he did just kick some guys butt for his daughter. Major brownie poimts with dad for that one Mas!

Author's Response: LoL sorry to disappoint! I know Ally was freaking out wasn't she? I think I'll add the label - hopeless romantic - to her resume. :) And you're right, AJ's warming up to Mason. I mean, who couldn't? He seriously is doing everything he can to be there for her and beating up Frank was just the cherry on top. :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 08:33 am Title: Chapter 37

AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ugh! Update soooooon!

Author's Response: Wow it was 3:33 in the morning my time when you wrote that. Hopefully a four hour wait didn't hurt. I'm going to post the next chapter in a minute!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 06:50 am Title: Chapter 37

Uh oh. I don't know. If its an engagement ring is Shelby going to react the way I want her to react? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: LOL I don't know, you never can tell with Shelby right?

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:47 am Title: Chapter 37

oh the twins are little cuties, that was nice of Mason :)to surpise her

Author's Response: Ah, Mason is nice. And cute. And...well, just so Mason!

Reviewer: cartergirl54 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 37

ur an awsome writer
i llove ur series of both storys

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying. :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 37

Aw, sweet chap! Love the holiday chapters. I LOVE that Shelby got some baby stuff...having a baby is exciting no matter what the circumstance :) Did I mention how much I love Ally? You can tell so much about her in this story and I love that. She seems to be kind of shy and a little insecure and wants to fit in. But very sweet and loving. I can't wait to read her story! I know I say that about everyone...lol. Great job!

Oh, and did I mention how much I LOVE Joe? Awesome!

Author's Response: LoL yeah I've got a hilarious line coming from Joe next chapter. And you've pegged Ally really well. She's still trying to find her place but she's got THE biggest heart. Kind of like AJ. Underneath it all self-conscious but warm-hearted.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:53 am Title: Chapter 37

I bet it's just a promise ring - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Oh Lenni, next chapter is for you. LoL

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter 36

Okay, how can the Principal NOT care that their basketball star was harassing her!?!? What a fat-ass Prick!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: see you said the magic word -- STAR. Frustrating isn't it?

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 37

WOW I wonder what will happen next,love this story.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:06 am Title: Chapter 37

I decided to come back and comment on something other than the ring. I love the when the twins wake everyone up and AJ having to hold them back by their pj's. :) And Ally's homemade gifts are so sweet, I can't wait to read her story btw. She seems like such a little sweetheart. And poor Mason walking in on that song, he must be scared now. I mean Ally may be sweet but I think she could hurt Mas if he ever did anything to Shelby, don't underestimate a Mclean!
P.S.- Thank you for saying you'll update this tomorrow morning. Maybe before 11? Please? I wanna read it before class. :)

Author's Response: Yeah I can just see those little twin legs kicking in the air. :) But you're right...DON"T mess with Ally's family. That equals BIG trouble. Btw, you're in luck. I go to work at nine so you will get an update before then. :)

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 37

Aww I had a feeling Mas was going to show up. :) Cant wait till tomorrow's update!
I love Ally! I cant wait for her story.
I use to think the same as Shel my bday is July 3rd and i thought the 4th was for me. lol

Author's Response: Aww thats cute about the 4th of July :) Mason's birthday's actually July 3. They're both holiday babies!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 37

Oh snap...A RING?!?!?!? Wow! A great Christmas chapter none-the-less. :D

Author's Response: I'm a big holiday fan if you haven't figured it out yet :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 37

Aw, i luv the presents! i am so like shel when it comes to presents, i just dive right in!
Aw, mom bought baby things! how sweet :)
i luv, luv, LUV Ally's present to Shel, so sweet :)
But I hafta say, Mason's present(s) were by far the bestest :)
A RING! Omg, omg, OMG! awesome :)
:::sitting on the end of my seat waiting for another update:::

Author's Response: Well, you'll have to wait until tomorrow morning! :) I love Ally's gift too...but Mason's now... :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 37

*looking around* Oh yes, she does? Oooohhh.... yep... she must be a wonderful Lady! *winks*
And yes, we have LOTS of homework here... heheh

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 37

*squeals uncontrollably* OH MY GOD!

Is that what I think it is? He's gonna propose, oh my freaking god! EEEE! lol at Joe he really is...something.

And I see you posted the beginning of Brookes story, gonna read it right now! :)

Author's Response: Aww Joe's great. I'd want a son like him. I'd probably go crazy but still! :)