Date: 09/02/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
By the way...Thanksgiving Turkey, best kind out there! :) Just saying......I love Turkey!!!
Author's Response: I do love T-day turkey! :)
Date: 09/02/10 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 36
That kid got off lucky getting slugged with her bag........she should have used her feet to connect with his "soft spot".......although I did love the Pillsberry dough boy description! Have so many thoughts running thru my head about your story, can't wait for an update!!!!! I know, we are so demanding aren't we? LOL Great Job Jen!
Author's Response: You're lucky it's my day off. Already got chapter three done too. :) And I'm working on my Brian fic. And I've not even opened a textbook. haha. I think she so would have kicked him in the gonads if the huge bus seats weren't seperating them. Got to love a 'little' Shelby flashback with the Pillsbury Doughboy description!
Date: 09/02/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 36
Oh my dear shel: "Maybe dad's advice about driving wasn't too far off. I just wish I had gotten it sooner.
If I had, maybe I would have realized that slow was good." But you are one of those that needs to suffer to get it.... *sighs* You dad's AMAZING!
And the 'God Bless you' comment was brilliant! ahhaha Joe you are.. I love you!
Author's Response: LoL I thought you'd enjoy Joe's comment!
Date: 09/02/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 36
glad i skipped drivers ed
Date: 09/02/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 35
Awww did I sad how much I DO love the Mcleans?
I DO!!!!
"Everything mom couldn't cook and dad didn't have the patience to cook." OUCH!
"Basically I 'had been complaining about everything." Lovely moments....
"And a special amen to the ladies at Kroger for preparing this TURKEY!" Joe said loudly." I love this kid. He is SUCH a young AJ! Ooohh and the pussy comment.... LORD!
"Are you going to fart as much as mom did when she was pregnant with these guys?" Joe asked, pointing a fork loaded with mashed potatoes at the twins." Ohh kids are such a joy... and Alex laughing! No one tell about those things when you're pregnant...
Ally is a poet! With this we know that she doesn't say a lot about her...well,we did know that.
I'm happy that Shel will atend to Art School and MAYBE go to Kentucky... but she will miss her Fam.
"I knew deep down dad had a hard time with the whole driving thing. If mom was late, he freaked out. Of course, I couldn't blame him. That's how Ally and Joe's mom had gotten hurt. And later died." Lord, I still get sad just with the thought of those chapters.... is normal that he still hates others driving.
And Denise is a sweet!!
Ally baking!!
Awww I LOOOOOOOVE Mcleans!
Author's Response: LoL I love them too :) Joe is so much fun to write, he IS a young AJ
Date: 09/02/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 35
Amazing job can't wait for more.
Date: 09/02/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 35
Finally she's getting what she wants! Lol. I understand A.J.'s no driving thing now - for awhile, I'd kinda forgot that's how Ro died.
God. I hope when I get pregnant some day, that my baby doesn't like turkey - I never eat turkey, unless it's sandwich turkey you get at the deli-lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yeah, Ro's been gone awhile in story time so I thought I'd throw that in as a reminder. :) LoL. I ONLY eat turkey on thanksgiving. And when I go to Subway :)
Date: 09/02/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 35
Nice chapter. :) Great that Shelby will be in an art school and POSSIBLY transfer to Mason's. ;) And yay about driver's ed. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL yeah I don't think AJ's too excited about the whole moving to Kentucky thing. Thought a happy chapter was in order!
Date: 09/02/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 35
Oh lord it is never boring at the Mclean household. I hope she has her baby with out complications. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 34
Lol. Candy poker sounds fun! I think I'd be less angry losing candy, than losing money - lol. I HATE to lose!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Words of wisdom? Me? *shocked look* I dunno why, but that makes me feel a lil' old - lol.
Author's Response: I hate to lose too! I don't like casinos for that very reason. :)
Date: 09/02/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 34
Lol on Shel still calling Nick bob. I have to say this took a slight different turn to what i had thought But its good. I keep checking for updates often. :) can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Hey, if it was predictable I would get tired of writing it : Glad you're still enjoying!
Date: 09/02/10 02:58 am Title: Chapter 34
I bet Shelby ends up winning the pot. Landon sounds adorable.
Author's Response: Addy wins the pot...Addy should do the World Series of Poker. Series. :) Landon does sound adorable...of course he's a Carter, and I'm SO partial to Carters. :)
Date: 09/02/10 01:46 am Title: Chapter 34
I so totally thought of you and this story at work. I had a newborn named Shelby (the first Shelby I've ever had). And about 5 doors down I had a newborn named Mason. I couldn't stop thinking about it. LOL
Great updates I really feel for them. It sucks being very young and having this happen but add on the added pressure of living a few states away, man. Make them happy already. Ha ha! No, never-mind. Because that means it would be finished. :-p
Author's Response: Aw that is so uber cute. A little Mason and Shelby! :) I love the name Shelby, but my friend already beat me to it. LoL yeah, I had initially intended for this story not to be so long but it's got a mind of it's own. All I can say is it will be over when it's over!
Date: 09/02/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 34
Lol they're gonna make great parents! I could picture Shelby and Landon on the sofa with Mason sitting on the floor by them, it was such a cute image! I know I'm gonna cry right along with Shel when Mas leaves, they belong together not seperated by several states.
Author's Response: I'm going to make it easy on everyone and skip ahead a little bit. Otherwise this story is going to be longer than BATB which well, would be crazy. So you can just assume that there were lots of tears and save those Kleenex til later!
Date: 09/01/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhh I can't wait for Brooke's story! I love Shelby's story! I was too a little taken back by Baby Landon! LOL Nice Surprise. I'm scared for Shelby...I couldn't imagine being so young, pregnant and having a guy like Mason already planning out the future....almost overwhelming!
Author's Response: Yeah I knew I wanted a fourth Carter and this seemed like the perfect way to introduce him! :) Yeah, it's not just almost overwhelming for Shelby...it IS overwhelming.
